Star Wars: Stranded on Zoma V - Sign Ups (CLOSED)/OOC Chat

This is my RP now

first major change as the new GM is to ban any other clone dialogue outside of “watch those wrist rockets!” so everyone speaks by emotional intent and inflection

essentially it’s an I am groot scenario, how’s that for a writing challenge

/s

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Duke could only stair as he watched what was left of his squad get blown to smithereens. “Watch those wrist rockets!” He called out, desperation, denial, and grief flooding the emotions in his voice. He ran to one of the clones, a brother in arms, no, a friend. He held the dying man in his trembling arms. “Watch those wrist rockets.” he assured, shakiness in his voice, trying to reassure the injured soldier in his final moments. He passed in his arms. “Watch…those…wrist rockets…” Was all the captain could manage, as the sorrow overwhelmed him…

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I was gripped, emotionally moved, my teeth rattles and my mind explode from the sheer awe of the storytelling and writing prowess embedded and intertwined into the dialogue, please sign my baby

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Would ya look at that Star Wars: Stranded on Zoma V. You didn’t think I’d actually get around to posting it tonight, admit it!/s

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Wait I wasn’t prepared for this outcome

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Hwat

Oh, are we just … getting our gear off the bat? What of it do we have now, if any? And is the scavenging left up to us to work into RP?

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Well I mean

if not, this here is certainly confusing

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ah

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There could be a hole in the hanger bay roof :stuck_out_tongue:

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I’ve updated it to include the commanding officers (Jedi and Duke)

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Thank ye.

Also, most of you probably wouldn’t be too familiar with one another. You might know the others’ name and specialty, but that’s up to you. You all would know Duke and the Jedi obviously, and you also might now Saddle. Aside from that, use your own discretion.

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I know everybody well, especially the foot soldiers
I honestly think Legacy would only recognize the armor types of everyone and the obvious fact that Wannabe is a medical droid. Im going to get started on my thing for him

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When everyone sound like temuera morrison it’s easy to pick out the one teen girl from the crowd, especially when she is having a nervous breakdown

Man that definitely sounds like it hurts It probably hurts a lot really painful and stuff by the way know what wouldn’t hurt?

punctuation

and maybe some paragraph breaks

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how you know a Rp’s going to be fun.

Wait, let me find that bingo card.

welp, I guess Legacy was sleeping before the crash, and now he’s pinned down by…

…bunk beds…

wow. This guy needs to do more combat and strength training

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Literally everyone except Saddle is beyond casual

Im kinda wondering why everyone is in the hangar bay

to be honest I had no idea we were on a large enough ship to have a hangar bay

They’re soldiers, not 7 people trapped in a moldy room underground, most likely they had training on kamino for something like this.

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