Starix, Hero of Feti-Nui




This is my first real MOC, and the first MOC I've posted on the boards. He's a matoran who was burned in a bad accident at a furnace, and was forced to build himself a new arm and leg. Fed up with the dystopian regime put on by the corrupt Turaga of his island, he becomes the Crimson Night, a vigilante hell-bent on justice to those who oppose the people. Armed with a plasma rifle and a hand-sword, he will bring freedom to his people, even when Mata- Nui seems to have forsaken them. Comments and critiques are welcome!
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Not a fan of it...I know there is a backstory but the left side looks wrong...and the inika build is really simple.

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Yeah if his good side wasn't a Inika build this guy would be pretty groovy. I actually like his burnt looking side cause it goes will with the backstory, though it could've been done better.

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Thanks for the feedback!

My first MOC was a Technic beam with eyes so yeah... I didn't post Beamy on the boards for obvious reason

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Like that you've incorporated ccbs and Bionicle building system in a natural way

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I like how you built the normal side. Neat.

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I lil standard build -wise. The concept of the arm is cool, but the execution is a bit lackluster. But, for a first MoC, not bad!

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Seems pretty basic.

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It looks like Tahu plus visorak.

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Tahu appears to have gone through some tough times.

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