Sukira With VTOL Vehicle

[Mechmaster]

so once again boredom took hold and i decided to do some moccing, i saw a few examples of mocs recently that used the scheme of orange and white and decided to try my hand.

i present the toa of plasma Sukira. the idea was to create just a normal female toa that sported the aforementioned colours.

here is a close up of the upper body.

lower body.

back shot.

pose-ability example, not the best but she gets the job done.

aww man i may be a toa of plasma but how am i supposed to get off of arah-nui and explore.

whoa what’s this!!!

so this is her VTOL vehicle found in the depths of Arah-nui during her explorations in the depths of the continent.

so this is it in its landed form with no pilot using its turbines to rest at an angle to ease the pilots entry.

here is the weapons systems deployed, just a pair of zamor firing cannons from the mistika.

the pilot sits up like this where the foot pedals can be accessed along with handles.

flight mode, the pilot sits back and can manouver correctly. i have to hold it up or too much stress gets put on it.

a head on shot.

sorry for the bad photos it was too big to photo at my usual place. thanks for looking at my moc as always comments and criticism are wanted.

also …

she isnt afraid of no stunts.

[Sammythekat]

I’ve never seen a MOC combine nuva and rahshiboob at the same time.

it makes the upper torso look WAY too bulky.

the vehicle is decent.

[Mechmaster]

ive seen a bunch but the same person, couldn’t find the makers name tho. by the same person sorry spelling error, all the creations but this one person i saw utilised both.
flikr post

[Sammythekat]

@Mechmaster

ive seen a bunch but the same person, couldn’t find the makers name tho

I’m sorry, what?!?

[Calebmar12]

I love the vehicle

[AwesomeJoel27]

@Mechmaster

flikr post

o-o not something i wanted to see today.

Well lets start with the chest being way too bulky, the legs loo awkward, there is a severe texture clash with the legs and the arms, the lower arms are MASSIVE and it has tiny user warms that are trying to be custom arms but could just be a CCBS bone, she looks awkward while in the vehicle.

Id recommend making the torso slimmer, using smoother parts on the legs, making the lower arms smaller, and making the upper arms just CCBS bones cause theres really no point for it to be custom.

[Mechmaster]

the uper arms looked too skinny with just a ccbs bone hence the change, and the same for the torso, i slimmed it down and it looked like it woud snap if poked by the tail of a rahi

@Sammythekat no i was just saying this is where i had seen the double use, this wasnt meant to be boobs as such it was more like heavy female chest armour., as for your edit, yes XD just wanted to armour this one up

@Saxton thanks but if you look above they arent supposed to be breasts per say XD

[Sammythekat]

OK.

those are extremely over-sexualized, and unless that’s what you’re going for, unlike what you’ve stated:

@Mechmaster

the idea was to create just a normal female toa that sported the aforementioned colours.

then it looks way to bulky.

also, the limbs are spindly, even without the ■■■■■■-like chest, and overall, this MOC looks off.

Also, may I just add:

@Mechmaster

the uper arms looked too skinny with just a ccbs bone

have ya tried making them just a CCBS bone on a moc this size that does not sport the h-cup breasts???

[Saxton]

I quite like the vehicle, though the breasts on Sukira do look a bit exaggerated.

Still pretty cool though!

Nice job!

[TheUpsidedownVahi]

The only difference between your moc and that guy’s mocs is that he can actually pull off that chest design.

[Mechmaster]

@Saxton
@ItalianMustache
@AwesomeJoel27
@Sammythekat

so i slimmed down the torso and changed the arms to be primarily ccbs, i also de-bulked the chest and relocated the nuva shoulders. what do you think, i personally like the legs so they will stay as is.

the shoulder on her left is pushed back slightly, i didnt notice during pictures, it has far better coverage usually.

@Louimath check out these new revisions

[TheUpsidedownVahi]

Honestly you just said something that not even me would know about.

@Mechmaster now she has that kind of torso I don’t like. But better

Do not double post. -Eljay

[Louimath]

It looks like the Rakshi heads are the boobs, and the nuva pieces are like some sort of undersized bra, which looks awkward…

As for the MOC, the build is ok, I think you can rework the vehicle, and the mask doesn’t fit really well… But otherwise I like the torso and legs!

Edit: The new torso looks a little better, and the arms are way more fitting. However, I still feel like the head is off, and that either a custom head or a different mask would look better.
Also sorry if my first part was out after the updates, had to go get diner.

[Mechmaster]

no problem i would use a custom head but i ran out of conventional orange parts.

[Sammythekat]

looks a bit better.

[Toa_Aveex]

Really Cool!

[AwesomeJoel27]

The legs still have a massive texture clash.

[Grimsock]

I personally really like the torso. Not bad…A bit awkward in some places, but not bad.
The vehicle is superb, btw

[Rons_oc]

i like the vehicle!

[Zero]

Rahkshi boobs?..

WAKE ME UP INSIDE SLOW

The rest of this is actually a great moc.