Tahu revamp 1.0 (feedback wanted!)

In the interest of actually learning how to MOC, I’ve decided to start by making revamps of the most well-known characters in Bionicle, starting with the big man himself: Tofu, the Toe Meaty of Fur, or whatever his name is. You know, the red one.


I reasoned this was a good place to start, since I don’t have to juggle drawing a totally new character from the aether while I cobble together a MOC. This is actually the latest of several attempts to render the Toa Mata, but it’s the only one so far with something resembling polish. In the interest of improving both my skills and this design, I’ve opted to actually post this here for once, seeing as this is the closest thing to a passable revamp I’ve cobbled together in my many lousy attempts thus far.

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(note: I realized his skirt thing is too shiny, so I decided that in future renders, it’ll be rubber black to look more like cloth)

So, as I fish for feedback, I want to provide some of the goals I had in mind while approaching this.

Goals
  • Challenge myself: Most of this build is custom, the only exception being the torso, which is a derived Metru build based on @WholesomeGadunka’s Toa of Psionics whose name I can’t be ■■■■■■■ bothered to remember. I only did this to add some waist articulation to give the build a bit more expression. All the custom bits are made less with the intent of “custom for custom’s sake” and more as an attempt to learn how to make custom stuff that works, especially where shape language is concerned.
  • Re-invent the Tahu-shaped wheel: I wanted this to be obviously Tahu, but more than that, I wanted a bit of personality in this, something clone sets just can’t provide. For his anatomy, I wanted him to read as being muscular, with “heroic” body proportions. I wanted to convey the “He-Man” or “Conan the Barbarian” physique, an idealized but theoretically attainable fighter’s body, most people’s idea of a “prime specimen” in terms of fitness and capability. This heroic appearance is meant to fit within most conceptions of Tahu while exaggerating what we already think about him.
  • Character design: The aforementioned body style is supposed to convey physical strength as well as give a sense of “manly toughness,” as well as evoke other characters we’re familiar with (again, He-Man, Conan, etc.). The color blocking, with the black skirt obscuring his red body, is also meant to evoke that “shirtless barbarian” look, which fits the hot climate he lives in. I also imagined the skirt as being some sort of cultural thing, like a piece of clothing that signifies who’s the “man of the house,” kind of like how the Turaga wear robes in the movies. Lhikan’s Hau is used in place of the standard Hau to fit with his super-detailed design, as well as stand out from regular Haus to emphasize his mask as being special and unique without being too derived from the original mask, as opposed to the Hau Nuva (yuck). And, lastly, his hands, which use custom parts from Megawillbot and are meant to evoke the original Mata “hands,” as well as the characters’ hands in BtG.
  • Plausibility: Not really my main goal, but still one I wanted to keep in mind, I wanted this to be a somewhat functional model that could exist IRL. There aren’t any illegal connections (that I noticed) and the model retains some good articulation, the only iffy bit being the shoulders. The only bit I’m not sure about is the gearbox; I’m not certain if there’s room for gears under the chestpiece, and the gear in the back is currently just decoration, but this is more a matter of me not having the motivation or willpower to actually figure that out.
  • Set an example: Tahu is the leader of his team and the mascot of Bionicle itself, so he’s usually the first one people see. As such, it was important for him to look like a believable “default” Toa while still retaining the character traits I was going for. That meant he couldn’t be excessively bulky (i.e. Onua), but not too thin (which I plan for Lewa to be). He had to look like he had idealized, but not cartoonish, humanoid proportions so as to give a baseline for the other Toa to play off of.

Like I said, this is a WIP and I’m only posting it here to get a feel for where it is now and where it needs to go as I look forward to the rest of the team.

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Looks like a darker… more sinister and mature version of Tahu… I like it, well done!

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Yeah, it could be some alternate universe Tahu. Also, nice moc, if a bit messy.

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Alright, because you’re someone I think is mature enough to take critique without losing it, here’s my honest opinion.

What you did poorly

Overall, the MOC feels a bit messy and thrown together, but that could be rectified pretty easily, and who knows, that may even be what you’re going for.

As far as the build itself is concerned, it’s actually fairly well done, at least by my standards. The main thing that tones it back to messy is the color blocking.

The legs: The shins have a little too much going on, and issue which is exacerbated by the different colors. I think if you changed the main armor piece to orange, it’d look a lot more unified. You could also change the liftarms on the thighs to red, to create color blocking in the armor. I’d say do the same for the arms. I think that’d create a much more unified look, although that might not be what you’re going for.

The torso is very basic, and the armor choice for the breastplate seems slightly lazy. Not only that, but it’d be impossible to pose in real life because of the Nuva shoulders, since one or the other would be pushing each other out of the way or getting caught on each other.

Also, if the gear on the back is just for show, an inika shoulder fits really well over the back of a metru torso by aligning to the half-pinholes with the top two axle holes and using 4L stoppered axles.

The hands are alright, if a little odd with only two fingers, but the feet seem pretty strange to me. I’d say just go for metru feet, to maintain a textured look while looking a lot more coherent.

What you did well

Absolutely nothing/s

So, I think you nailed the aesthetic in terms of the actual structure. The limbs are proportioned well with the body to seem imposing and well built. I think the choice of mask is fantastic, and the battle skirt really does sell the shirtless vibe.

The use of HF heads for the forearms is a good piece choice, as it also sells the well-muscled look you’re going for.

Overall, I’d say this MOC is off to a very good start. Best of luck in your endeavors, looking forward to whatever you post in the future.

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So, I took your feedback into consideration, and while I wasn’t currently able to address every point, I brushed him up a little to try and rectify some of the things you took issue with, mostly the bit about him being too busy.

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There’s only a couple things you said that I can’t really do anything about atm:

  1. I went into this saying “I’m going to make a modified Metru build.” That’s what this is, for better or worse. It’s actually got more going on than a normal Metru build, and getting the HF chest on at all was actually kind of a pain in the ■■■. It turned out to be for naught because I later realized a Nuva torso gave me “muscular” shaping just fine. Yeah…■■■■.
  2. The feet look weird because, well, feet are weird. I mean, you ever seen a foot? Horrible. It’s a bony meat paddle with articulate nubs on it. So, Tahu’s foot here represents a normal Matoran foot, albeit a larger one, so it’s gross and ugly. When I move on to other Toa like Kopaka and Pohatu, I’ll have different feet to represent boots. That said, I understand that the feet aren’t the best look, so I’ll keep that in mind and try to make something better down the road.

That aside, does he look less cluttered now? I also added a Slizer foot to his back and some more flaps to his waist-robe (that’s what we’re calling it now it’s not a bloody skirt) to flesh out his silhouette a bit.

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That looks so much more unified. I think changing the liftarms in the legs and the color of the Metru torso to black really did wonders.

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Cool, he looks better now.

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I like the leg design, but I think the torso and arms should be bulked up to match the legs.

Looks like he’d battle the forces of hell.

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