Hi. I'm... You can see my username, great. I'm also known as Jayheich on YouTube and after trying to get this story out there, I finally decided I join the Message Boards. I posted this in the comments of a podcast episode a while back, asking for feedback, but mostly wanting to share. And I'm here to do the same thing.
This story is and always will be a work in progress. Once I wrap up the 12 planned chapters, I will go back for lots of editing. The feedback is just to help me establish what I should work on for the sake of other projects. Keep in mind the opening 4 or so pages are just refreshers.
Tahu's Journey: After the Battle for Spherus Magna, all have settled into this new world of theirs, minus Tahu. Tahu feels as though he has been robbed of some greater purpose now being stuck as a Turaga of Fire and not Turaga Nuva. While learning to cope with this truth with the aid of his friends and the spirit of Mata Nui, the world is placed under threat of ruin at the hands of an unknown enemy that has the might of A Hundred Armies. (Based on a story idea conceived at the end of a Bionicle Autopsy video)