Hi. I’m… You can see my username, great. I’m also known as Jayheich on YouTube and after trying to get this story out there, I finally decided I join the Message Boards. I posted this in the comments of a podcast episode a while back, asking for feedback, but mostly wanting to share. And I’m here to do the same thing.
This story is and always will be a work in progress. Once I wrap up the 12 planned chapters, I will go back for lots of editing. The feedback is just to help me establish what I should work on for the sake of other projects. Keep in mind the opening 4 or so pages are just refreshers.