History(Real Life)
I was build like I do and trying to make more Matoran when As I built he stared to look bigger than a normal Matroran so a few Hours later he was My first Custom toros built Toa.
History(Bionicle story)
Toa Tanaru,one Of the many Toa Teams on Spherus Magna Head Toward the Newly Discovered Planet of Avean nui.As he leads his team to the Planet with Many colonies of Matoran. They discover a Enemy long Forgotten who will Cause Major Havoc.
Now hear me out, it’s well built, and looks nice, but this is pretty much the most generic thing I’ve ever seen. the color scheme, the weapons, the mask, all of it just makes it look excruciatingly bland.
you have skill. I’d love to see more MOCs from you.
I don’t necessarily think Silver and an Avohkii make the MOC bad(I actually love the Avohkii!), but I do believe that you should maybe change silver to an accent color and make the main color a tad brighter, except for the Dark Mirror one, because that makes sense to be darkly colored.
that doesn’t mean it has to be as generic as this. Also, the gunmetal isn’t the issue. It’s the silver. Also, as I’ve said before many times, story doesn’t excuse flaws.
