I think if you added just a couple of white claws to the chest it would fix the problem we have with it
Sorta. Most of it is smooth, but the smooth bits have small details that keep it from being entirely smooth.
Lower legs: mostly smooth, but has the rivets and panel lines on the knight shin armor, and the triangle in the piece above that.
Thighs: The front panel is smooth, but the rest of it is less so, with the 2015 add on and the rest of it being technic bits.
Crotch: The CCBS is smooth, but then we get to the slizer feet which has the gaps and the technic holes
Butt: The mata foot has ridges on the side, and the nuva shoulders have the two gaps.
Shoulders: Is this refering to the upper torso, the arm shoulders, or something else? Because the arm shoulders seem to be covered in arms…
Back: It’s covered with pretty detailed golden spikes…
Arms: Metru shoulder armor and metru lower arm armor is pretty detailed.
No, but it has to be cohesive and mostly uniform through out. Maybe if it were a bit smaller it would look better.
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Oh no, I ain’t making the hunchback of Notre Dame. The pauldron takes a good bit of space and even as it is has very limited movement. Raising the shoulders would put it on level with the top of the head. It wouldn’t be a pauldron anymore, it’d be hunch protection.
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Imo it sorta already looks hunchbacked. But I see what you mean. Although I still think you could make it Work.
You’re expecting a bit much from me.
Probably, given enough time. But it wouldn’t be fun anymore.
Ehh, G1 parts aren’t the best for cohesiveness…
Yeah. What do you mean by fun?
The reason I moc: Because it’s fun. I get the kicks out of making a new character, giving it personality and a story. It’s my joy and I like being casual about it.
Should I feel pressure to be ‘perfect’ or ‘pro’ and delve into the smallest details on a moc would be more of a burden than a joy. It’d take more time than I’d like. Especially since I prefer to move onto new mocs than linger on the old. So many ideas to execute, but even now I can’t make them at the pace I’d wish to.
Because I’m offering critique to try and help him improve his moc.
Oh. I thought it was a function or something.
Yeah but you might be giving too much critique.
And that is a problem how?
I feel like you’re just being too critical, and it’s a problem because he can make the moc however he wants and if he wants to make it smooth than let him.
I dont want to make any enemies so I’m going to leave this conversation.
You won’t. It’s normal to voice your opinions here.
Looks amazing. I love it.
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I’m not saying he can’t make it smooth. He could even go the opposite route I suggest, and get rid of the other textures. All I’m trying to do is help him improve.
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Ok thanks.
I see that but it’s his style, he can do it how ever he wants. I know it’s none of my business but cut him some slack.
Edited for double-post. --John Smith
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like I said, I think just two little white claws could fit the problem of the chest being too flat
http://cache.lego.com/media/bricks/5/2/4566256.jpg
^ these
I don’t really know what else I can say except I’m trying to help…
That about sums it. I like to challenge the mocing norms people spout about, it’s what makes my style unique to myself and it’s what I’d like to be admired for, seeing that I’ve been bio-mocing for 10 years now. (10th mocaversary on July 27th)
That’s how I personally admire the mocers I admire. I appreciate what makes their style unique and wouldn’t go about spouting to change it. I take their difference as a learning experience and apply to my own mocs from them what I deem fit.
I definitely appreciate the feedback and I try to always be open-minded to suggestions when I see a fair point. However, I’m not really a revamping type of person, so whatever I learn is reserved for future mocs. So I’ll likely improve based on the feedback, but it won’t be easy to notice, as I’m unlikely to repeat a design so soon.
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I understand you’re trying to help, I’m sorry if I seemed hostile at the time. I was a little irritated about something else, apologies for any offense.
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reading the little lore and seeing the moc (plus that one joke) I am guessing significant soulsborne inspiration on this guy.
even if not, i would recommend keeping the soulsborne aesthetic for further mocs in the series, especially in posing and story tone. its something i don’t often see done thats just me though, and these are your mocs, so…
in whatever case, this is a dang good moc.congratulations
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Great moc. Love the consistent color scheme and almost consistent texture
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I just love that asymmetrical armor. Looks great!
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