This is Télya.
He’s a warrior who guards the safest place on Tipukoto, The Haven.
He uses no weapons, for she needs none to protect.
Constructive criticism encouraged, as always.
He uses no weapons, for she needs none to protect.
Constructive criticism encouraged, as always.
7 Likes
Well, it’s very generic, excluding the cape.
She’s almost fully monochrome. It needs more red.
She looks nothing like a female. The torso and arm are the cause of this.
She has a silver avohkii.
It needs some improvements.
3 Likes
It could use some more Metru red, too much silver and gray. Although I’d say the Avohkii actually works here.
2 Likes
Okay…
What do people have against the Avohkii?
And I meant him to be a guy, I fixed it.
(Autocorrect does weird things on my kindle)
2 Likes
I mean, the avohkii is in itself quite generic and overused. If it is a male, then the main problem is the colorscheme and borderline generic build.
2 Likes
I’ll work on the colour scheme… -grumble-
But how is custom generic?
This looks pretty solid, but the waist is awkward, the shoulders are too borad, and te burnt orange is out of place.
Cool, but needs a lot of work.
I mean, the Avohkii has a really cool aesthetic, so I see nothing wrong with using it in silver, which works well with most color schemes.
2 Likes
Do you mean the metru red?
1 Like
Just because something is custom doesn’t make it unique. This build could look more unique, but is really just very normal posture with a nuvachest.
?
1 Like
That’s Metru Red?
I blame lighting.
And yes, the reddish parts on the shoulders.
1 Like
I spent forever on the colour scheme.
Also, the legs look really awkward, I would recommend reworking them.
1 Like
I never got this sentiment.
I don’t want him to look “unique”, per say.
I want him to look like a Toa sized, normally proportioned build.
1 Like
This seems like an excuse not to go through the work of giving him weapons, especially when none of his powers/abilities have been explained.
1 Like