TFM101's Self MOC

Time I release one.


He was originally going to be a Nuparu MOC i made, but decided that he will be a self MOC.
Feel free to critique.
Pros, Cons, all that jazz.

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Interesting, but it needs a consistent color scheme. I recommend choosing one trans color, rather than having two.

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0/10 lack of pink fluffiness - IGN /s

In all seriousness this looks pretty cool.

This too.

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I made a G2 Nuparu MoC first ya know...

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I know. I revamped him. I'll upload them soon. Besides,

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Unintentional double post, but the revamp and Toa form is here!
Toa:


"Matoran"

Some Bio stuff:
Name:Tafum
Title: Po-Matoran/Toa of Stone
Weapons: Electric Sword, Fist o' Electro-Quake
Mask: Kadin, Great Mask of Flight
Abilities: (Mask) Flying, (Weapon) causing earthquakes, shocking someone, (Element) Stone-based abilities

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First of all, I recommend you try and take some pictures with better lighting and posing. They'll greatly aid you MOC's presentation.


The shoulders seem overly broad (probably because of those extra-wide shells).

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Gonna agree with legomaster here. Shoulders are awkwardly broad.

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Wow, he even has the electric-sword-thing.
dat's mah boi

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Did not mean to copy. Besides, that is a Electro-Volt Cystallizer.

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That's okay.

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Also, thanks to @HewkiiTheKokhiiHead for the base of my MOC!

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Nice! I like the Toa form a lot!

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