The Absconded - Turquoise Warrior




Part of one of the largest colonies from a dying world, the Turquoise Warrior travels with its swarm, named the Absconded, and, while concerned for its environment, will stop at nothing to find, or make, a new hive for its queen. Sometimes, the swarm would occupy an existing hive of one of their enemies for a certain amount of time before leaving again. The Turquoise Warrior mainly uses its two claws for close combat, and can rely on its minor claws if needed. Each warrior has an enchanted crystal embedded in its chest, which acts as a source of magic for the warrior to use and is usually full of color. Magic bullets can be shot from the main claws only, and warriors use magic to either shoot in a pattern, shoot towards a specific target, or cast Area Effect spells. It’s stinger can also shoot magic in the form of a pulsing laser, however the stinger is rarely used for close combat as, while not represented in the actual MOC, the stinger is barbed and will rip out of the warrior if it is caught in it’s enemy, killing the warrior.

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This looks pretty cool. It looks like you were going for a definite “insect” vibe here. In a lot of ways, it was executed pretty well. I like the design of the claws and the wings especially. However, I see a few issues here. The color distribution is a little odd, like how the legs have so much blue on them and the arms are mostly silver. I would probably do away with the trans dark blue entirely. However, if you tidied it up a little this color scheme could be really cool. The torso looks a little blocky and gappy. You could probably slim it down a lot and it would look better.

All in all, this is pretty gr8 m8! Keep working with it and you could have something really awesome here.

Pretty cool, just needs some fine tuning.

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Not bad, really does look insectiod.

Much better.