let’s do it together.
are you not bothered that this topic was 5 years.
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Sounds good.
No.
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This is kind of just a list of traits–I’m not really sure that possessing them makes a character too perfect, it’s probably more about the character’s execution/presentation than actual things about them. Maybe. Though enough of these traits will, I guess, make the character a boring cliché.
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I don’t remember if I did this originally or not, but I do remember seeing this topic. Not including what’s par for the course in BIONICLE.
[Jethryn] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[Jethryn would have eventually] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[Jethryn, Jetera] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Jethryn, as a Kanohi power] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[Jetera] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Jethryn/Jetera] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[I don’t remember, but probably Jethryn] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[Jethryn] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[Jetera] They have a guardian spirit
[Jethryn/Jetera] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[Jethryn] Their soul is not the same as them
[Jetera] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[Jetera, eventually] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[Jethryn] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[Jetera] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[Jethryn/Jetera] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[Jethryn] They are emotionless
9 for Jethryn, 8 for Jetera.
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The Bohrok Lord - An earlier version of Sharnak I made when I was 12. Once an ordinary Le-Matoran from Metru-Nui, he fell into a bohrok nest where his head was exposed to energized protodermis, turning it into a Tahnok-Kal’s. Has all 12 bohrok powers. His head has no Krana, rather a pocket dimension. Despite all his powers, he’s kind of an idiot and a jerk that no one takes seriously, not even himself. Did I mention I made him when I was 12?
Sharnak - a Le-Matoran from Metru-Nui that either fled or was exiled during the civil war. He is a skilled engineer, creating experimental tools, gadgets and managed to reverse engineer the Vahki. He is eccentric and jaded, especially among Le-Matoran. Has a strong dislike for authority. Wears a powerless Akakau. Is destined to become a Toa.
Ansark - Sharnak from an antimatter universe. Has a specialized energy shield and devices that shield him from the main universe. Though a matoran, his tools allow him to channel his limited elemental powers, which take the form of destructive anit-matter energy in the main universe. His shield makes him resistant to physical damage, but if ever punctured, he is completely destroyed in a blast of energy. Though a matoran at the beginning, he gradually replaces parts of himself until he become something unrecognizable.
Lizard Wizard - My Argonian that I always play as in every Elder Scrolls game. All he wants to do is live a quiet life, but is always dragged into fate of the world prophecies. How does he live over two hundred years? Why does his appearance always change? The Hist made him a Time Lord or something IDK. And yes, that is his name.
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[LW] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (Werewolf in Skyrim)
[] They are physically strong.
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[A] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[TBL] Their eyes change color (Went from red, blue, to cyan)
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[LW] They are immortal (Due to corpus, Lizard Wizard is biologically immortal)
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[TBL/LW] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (If one counts certain bohrok powers, then yes)
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[A/LW] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[LW] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[LW] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[LW] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[TBL/S/A] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
[TBL?] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (If one counts bohrok)
[LW?] They never knew their parents (Had to be born to uncertain parents to fufill the nerevarine prophecy. Of course, due to time travel, they might not have been born yet.)
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[A] They have lots of friends/no friends
[A] They are emo/cutesy
[LW?] They look much younger/older than they really are. (Potentially. And depending on perspective, he’s -200.)
[LW] They are currently in a relationship (Is married in Skyrim)
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[A] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[S/A/LW] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[LW] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[TBL] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (Had a pet kraata that died very quickly)
[] They have a guardian spirit
[LW] They have a ‘special type’ of soul (Is both a dragon’s and the reincarnation of a Chimer hero)
[LW] Their soul is not the same as them
[LW] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Has had conversations with ghosts, so this technically counts)
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[LW?] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (While not a holiday, he is born under a certian date to fulfill the Nerevarine prophecy)
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[TBL/S/A] They are connected with a certain element (Air)
[TBL] They are connected with a certain animal (If one counts bohrok)
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[LW] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[All] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[LW] The have a curse upon them (Lycanthropy)
[LW] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[LW] They are ‘the chosen one’
[LW] They have insomnia (You never have to sleep in skyim)
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[A] They have a short temper
[TBL] They enjoy bullying others
[A] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
FINALS SCORES
TBL - 7
Sharnak - 4
Ansark - 7
Lizard Wizard - 21
Considering TBL has 12 powers, I wouldn’t call him balanced. Lizard Wizard is unsurprising though, he basically becomes a god at the end of each game.
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Alright it’s time to run the test for the greatest character of them all:
Ghid.
They are possessed by an angel
They are possessed by a demon
They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[G] They are physically strong.
They have a rare hair/fur color
[G] Their eyes are an unusual color
This happens to be red
Their eyes change color
They have wings
[G] They can grow extra body parts/ [what is this ceosored wor- oh right shapeshift]
[G] They are immortal
(if a female) they have large boobs
[…G?] (if a male) they are very muscular
They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[…G?] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
They are a healer
They are from a very rich/royal family
They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
They have lost one/both of their parents
They ran away from home
Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
They never knew their parents
They were abused/spoiled as a child
They are very attractive to the same gender
[G] They have lots of friends/no friends
They are emo/cutesy
They look much younger/older than they really are.
They are currently in a relationship
[G] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
They have a mental disorder
They have an emotional disorder
They struggle to stay sane
[G] They are a psycho
They have multiple personalities
[G] They are very intelligent
They have hallucinations
They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
They have a guardian spirit
They have a ‘special type’ of soul
Their soul is not the same as them
They can talk to spirits/ghosts
Some part of their body glows
[G] They have a rare/unusual name
They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
They are connected with a certain element
They are connected with a certain animal
They always dress like a certain ‘label’
They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga HOW DARE YOU EVEN CONSIDER THIS QUESTION
They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[G] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
They are hiding from someone/something
They have a rare blood type
They cry blood
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
They are from a different country to where they live
[G] They are very mysterious/dark
[G] They are very lively/happy
[G] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
They are very patient
They are from a long line of …
[G] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
They have amnesia
[G] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
The have a curse upon them
They are involved in some sort of prophecy
They are ‘the chosen one’
They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
They smoke
They are an alcoholic
They are overweight
They are addicted to drugs
[G] They have a short temper
They enjoy bullying others
[G] They do not care much about others
They are emotionless
So 17 counting the maybes. Also 2 in the ‘good’ section? This comprehensive test is lacking in a couple areas and assumes in a few as well.
Also, quickly gonna mention:
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
‘Lots of morals’ here implies virtuous morals. Ghid’s depiction in written work has always established him as a morally complex character, but always a conflicted one as well. He will proudly proclaim his perceived-as-objective perspective on society, which is always just shy of being moral but too strong and well-versed to be contested with any success. As fatalistic or overbearing as the reach of his morality may be, you are compelled to agree - he’s 80% right, after all.
Also just like me he’s VERY intelligent and has EXTREMELY good attire and wait why did I check psycho
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[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
Doug’s a doggo, like all the other clones.
[X] They are physically strong.
He stronk
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They ran away from home
[X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
As much as you can call your dna template a parent.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
Then again, it might’ve just been another clone, they all start to blurr together after a while
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
Cycles through both
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a ‘special type’ of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name
Doug: Because it’s a pun, since its a name, and it sounds like the word dog, and doug is a wolf, and wolves are related to dogs somehow, even though Doug is actually probably a coyote man thing, but that’s close enough for it to be clever and funny
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
I mean probably, clones like him are all over the place.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain ‘label’
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
I mean he basically exists to act as a yes Man and Muscle for some ambitious thug looking to make it big.
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[X] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
Well, he is on the run after all
[X] They are hiding from someone/something
He’s not exactly the most popular coyote/wolf/dog/man thing in town, thought how they can tell him apart from the rest is beyond me
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of …
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are ‘the chosen one’
[] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
Doug: 12
…Wait a minute…
I wasn’t, I just didn’t realize… you know, never mind. I don’t understand and I’m not meant to. 
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Haven’t done one of these in a while. Let’s see how well my character Dolphus from the rp Tales of Glory and Valour: The Seafarers does 
They are possessed by an angel
They are possessed by a demon
They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
They are physically strong.
They have a rare hair/fur color
Their eyes are an unusual color
This happens to be red
Their eyes change color
They have wings (singular for Dolphus)
They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■ (does anyone know what this was supposed to be)
They are immortal
(if a female) they have large boobs
(if a male) they are very muscular
They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
They are a healer
They are from a very rich/royal family
They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
They have lost one/both of their parents
They ran away from home
[ish] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (not really sure how to answer this one because his mom was nice but died and his dad was very wicked but not to him per se [he also died])
They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
They never knew their parents
They were abused/spoiled as a child
They are very attractive to the same gender
They have lots of friends/no friends
They are emo/cutesy (checking this one since self-pity is a favorite pastime of Dolphus’ and his being young often leads to him feeling like people look down on him because of it)
They look much younger/older than they really are.
They are currently in a relationship
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
They have a mental disorder
They have an emotional disorder (checking this one since there’s no option for trauma/traumatic experiences, which is honestly kinda wack)
They struggle to stay sane
They are a psycho
They have multiple personalities
They are very intelligent (Dolphus would probably be a lot more capable of utilizing his intelligence if he wasn’t being such a snot all the time)
They have hallucinations
They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
They have a guardian spirit
They have a ‘special type’ of soul
Their soul is not the same as them
They can talk to spirits/ghosts (technically yes but that’s only because everyone can [if you’re in Togav you know ])
Some part of their body glows
They have a rare/unusual name (I mean I guess idk)
They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
They are connected with a certain element
They are connected with a certain animal (take a wild guess folks)
They always dress like a certain ‘label’
They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (it’s almost entirely in Dolphus’ head, but yes)
They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
They are hiding from someone/something
They have a rare blood type
They cry blood
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (I feel like Dolphus has been on the edge of a nervous breakdown for most of the rp)
They are from a different country to where they live
They are very mysterious/dark
They are very lively/happy
Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
They are very patient
They are from a long line of … (political manipulators, leveraging the financial systems in place to make everything worse all the time; corporatism at its finest 
)
They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (military cape [guess why])
They have amnesia (part of this complete breakfast [comes with abandonment issues and a massive concussion])
They have some sort of permanent medical condition
The have a curse upon them
They are involved in some sort of prophecy
They are ‘the chosen one’
They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements: (Honestly this part doesn’t defy Mary Sue conventions by any means but whatever)
They smoke
They are an alcoholic
They are overweight
They are addicted to drugs
They have a short temper
They enjoy bullying others (depends on the person)
They do not care much about others (depends on the person [some people he greatly obsesses over])
They are emotionless
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It would’ve been “shapeshift”
If you start a reply to a specific post, then press the speech bubble icon, it’ll quote the post in full including uncensoring any censored text
Quite useful for situations like this
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I feel this list could afford to be scrubbed a little bit, it’s simultaneously strictly defined and immensely ambiguous
Dolphins didn’t check either box
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Maybe it’s because he isn’t designed with the intent of being simped after 
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Yahru = Y, Seihu =S
They are possessed by an angel
They are possessed by a demon
They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
They are physically strong.
They have a rare hair/fur color
Their eyes are an unusual color
This happens to be red
Their eyes change color
They have wings
They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
They are immortal
(if a male) they are very muscular
They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[Y(maybe), S] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Y(maybe), S] They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
They are a healer
They are from a very rich/royal family
They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
They have lost one/both of their parents
They ran away from home
Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death
They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
They never knew their parents
They were abused/spoiled as a child
They are very attractive to the same gender
They have lots of friends/no friends
They are emo/cutesy
They look much younger/older than they really are.
They are currently in a relationship
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
They have a mental disorder
They have an emotional disorder
They struggle to stay sane
They are a psycho
They have multiple personalities
They are very intelligent
They have hallucinations
They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
They have a guardian spirit
They have a ‘special type’ of soul
Their soul is not the same as them
They can talk to spirits/ghosts
Some part of their body glows
They have a rare/unusual name
They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[S] They are connected with a certain element
They are connected with a certain animal
They always dress like a certain ‘label’
They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
They are hiding from someone/something
They have a rare blood type
They cry blood
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[Y, S] They are from a different country to where they live
They are very mysterious/dark
They are very lively/happy
Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
They are very patient
They are from a long line of …
They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
They have amnesia
They have some sort of permanent medical condition
The have a curse upon them
They are involved in some sort of prophecy
They are ‘the chosen one’
They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
They smoke
They are an alcoholic
They are overweight
They are addicted to drugs
They have a short temper
They enjoy bullying others
They do not care much about others
They are emotionless
Looks like neither of them count as a Gary Stu. Seihu on the other hand sort of counts as a chosen one given that he’s a Toa, but so was every other Toa in that measure.
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This looks fun. Gonna run my character Ari Wohlford from one of the best RPs on the boards, ToGaV (man her design in that post is outdated, I’ll need to replace it with a newer drawing)
They are possessed by an angel
They are possessed by a demon
They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
They are physically strong.
They have a rare hair/fur color (red but like… literally red)
Their eyes are an unusual color
This happens to be red
Their eyes change color
They have wings
They can grow extra body parts/ ■■■■■■■■■■
They are immortal
(if a female) they have large boobs
(if a male) they are very muscular
[?] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Idk, depends on the person. This point is a bit silly)
They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
They have a special ability/power, but they don’t know about it yet
They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
They are a healer
They are from a very rich/royal family
They don’t know that they are from a very rich/royal background
They have lost one/both of their parents
They ran away from home
Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[?] They witnessed one/both of their parent’s death (Haven’t figured out this bit of the lore yet)
They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (does crab person count?)
They never knew their parents
They were abused/spoiled as a child
[?] They are very attractive to the same gender (idk, depends on the person. This point is a bit silly)
They have lots of friends/no friends
They are emo/cutesy
They look much younger/older than they really are.
They are currently in a relationship (the only ship she has any relations to is the one that floats in water )
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: ‘I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend’ ‘Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family’ ‘I wouldn’t hesitate to die in place of a friend’ etc. It’s fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
They have a mental disorder
They have an emotional disorder
They struggle to stay sane
They are a psycho
They have multiple personalities
They are very intelligent
They have hallucinations
They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
They have a guardian spirit
They have a ‘special type’ of soul (what in the world does this even mean!?)
Their soul is not the same as them (what in the world does this even mean!?)
They can talk to spirits/ghosts (the entire crew of the Kaelin’s Hand can communicate with the Ghost Sailors, so yeah no)
Some part of their body glows
They have a rare/unusual name (I guess…)
They were born on an important date, such as New Year’s Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age (This is major spoilers for the Wohlford lore so I will neither confirm nor deny)
They are connected with a certain element
They are connected with a certain animal
They always dress like a certain ‘label’
They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (crab people, yes)
They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (Idk does being really physically strong count?)
They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
They are hiding from someone/something
They have a rare blood type
They cry blood (when in the world has this been anyone’s character trait, ever?)
Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (the letters G, O, R, O, V, arranged in that exact order)
They are from a different country to where they live
They are very mysterious/dark
They are very lively/happy
Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
They are very patient
They are from a long line of … (people who build ships for a living. One of them was a crab)
They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
They have amnesia
They have some sort of permanent medical condition (does being really fricking buff count?)
The have a curse upon them
They are involved in some sort of prophecy
They are ‘the chosen one’
They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
They smoke
They are an alcoholic
They are overweight
They are addicted to drugs
They have a short temper
They enjoy bullying others (unintentionally, yes)
They do not care much about others
They are emotionless
Aaand the final score is 10. I guess Ari is a balanced character yay (it is an accident, I can’t write)
And quite a few of the points on the list make zero sense. Yeah I’d say a redo wouldn’t hurt
Dolphus when he is not a Hasbin Hotel character
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Seeing as Dolphus is 14 that’s another reason I didn’t check this
Nota, a character isn’t truly great unless both of his parents die in front of him under very harrowing and traumatizing circumstances which he does not possess the mental maturity to properly cope with (I am not referring to any specific character whatsoever 
)
Unbelievably based
I am not racist against crab people! I think they taste delicious especially when slow boiled 
Her certain power is being made of concrete and never exercising yet having perfect abs 24/7
now why would that be
“I’m just big boned”
“…and by that I mean there is a cyst directly under my bicep help”
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Completely unrelated to this, I had shrimp for lunch today
Now let’s not jump to conclusions here
I never stated that she never exercises. And the second half of the statement is just false. They didn’t have steroids in Middle Ages
Me when I make a typo
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Shrimply amazing
Mariner is going to kill you 
Ooh, says the guy who was totally there I’ll have you know everyone was dumping trenbolone left and right when I was in middle (ages) school
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