The NIGHTMARE: Czarkor

Original Version:

Has waist articulation (up and down).

Comment, Critique, etc.

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The chest, the feet are disproportionate, the arms stick out, and around the stomach area the blades look awkward. Anyway great moc. grin Also no neck.

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....elaborate? stuck_out_tongue

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As shown in pictures 1 2 and 3, you can clearly see the arms can't go straight down, not sure if its the armor.

this is the first moc of yours I actually like!

its a nice looking moc man, the feet are awkward, and the yellow banana thing is off putting, but otherwise I luv it

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They can go straight down. I just posed it with its arms splayed out because it looked cooler

:smile: It's an Electromagnetic whip

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An electro banana whip. The most powerful tool of all.

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Its too OP

please nerf it

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RIP rectangle body... Never forget...

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The original one was great (apart from the rectangle body) but this one...
* whistles *
This is amazing.

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The blades on the upper part of the legs look a bit awkward, but apart from that its an amazing MOC smile

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Better nerf Greninja.

Dang, this is definitely an improvement! Rectangular torso is gone, so that's good. The only thing I have to say is that he could have a bit more flow. Overall though this is a major improvement! Nice job!

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I only wish it had thumbs

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I just now gave him a thumb on his right hand using this:

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Much better than the original version,kudos.

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Czarkor looks awesome!
But the blue pins are noticeable and that yellow piece at the chest feels unnecessary.

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He doesn't have a blocky torso.

I still don't like it but it is one step up from the original.

How can I improve?

I for one, like it. It's not perfect by any means, but it is good.