This is my point. Do you understand that?!

This is something I’ve wanted to do for a while and finally got around to it. In short, it’s my own soldier loadout.

Tell me what you think of it! Constructive criticism is welcome.

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Don’t play TF2 to often, but this is a pretty good sketch overall!

Love the line-work. Although I wish some of the background lines would be removed. Then again, it does give it a “sketchy” style.

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Nice.

The linework isn’t bad, but I think that the background and foreground meld together too much.

You need to make them distinct with some kind of contrast; as it stands, it took a minute for my eyes to understand what’s what.

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The depth perception here is a little off, you might need some sort of design that helps people get a perspective.

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looks like a

Nazi

Emm

Last I checked Nazis don’t wear bandanas, an aviator helmet, and a coif with a rocket emblem sewn onto the sleeves.

Although this is based off of a character that makes verrry racist comments and cheers for 'Murica to no end so…

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Who dis be?

That being the soldier from TF2.

Yo where’s the head rack?