Tia the Vengeful Cyborg

Here she is. Tia is a being that likes exploring new places and meet new people. It was during one of her explorations to a island which she had heard about that she came into contact with the ruler of the lord of that land. Karzhani. He captured Tia after a short fight and took her to his lab where he changed her. He gave her cybernetic inplants and tore of her arm and replaced it with a mechanical one. After this he let her lose to see his new creation in action. But instead of seeing her obeying his commands she escaped from the island. How she did that is beyond her. After her escape Karzhani was captured by the order of Mata Nui and Tia disappeared. Then everything from G1 happened and both Tia and Karzhani ended up on Spherus Magna. There Tia hearde rumors about Karzhani still being alive and began her quest for revenge.

In this reality the events on Spherus Magna happened differently from the G1 story so Karzhani was not killed by Velika. I thought It would be good to cleare that up.

Now for pictures.

one of her cybernetic weapons she got from Karzhani.

Adjusting her robot arm.

Her alongside Sagittarus. And yes they are in the same universe.

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That torso is VERY skinny, but other than that this looks pretty great.

Good attempt at a skinny female moc, however it seems that the reason for her being skinny is that your previous moc Sagittarus took up most of your pieces.:joy: Which sorta causes her to look incomplete and unpolished IMO

@MinusOneEighth ya I know. @Tobin-Bartram the reasone for her beign skinny is because I wanted to build her like that. But you are right in that she could use some adjustments. And I also wanted her to have the opposite body type compared to Sagittarus.

The skinniness looks pretty good, but it’s offset by the custom legs that are each thicker than the entire torso, there isn’t that much to fix here but it still has some weirdness.

@MinusOneEighth Ya I see what you mean. I might try and buff up the torso a bit.

Not great, but not terrible.

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@Hutere_the_Toa_of_Air thanks… I guess.

You have some interesting designs here, but I would redesign the torso and the lower half of the right arm.

BLANK HEAD 0/10.
jk nice MOC, I just have a personal problem with blank heads.

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@Altair why is that? I think they can be really cool.

@Sonus I understand the torso but why change the lower right arm? Also if you have any tips for how I should change them I would appreciate them.

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~Chronicler

I think they can look good too, I just don’t like them all that much (no particular reason).

The torso is way too long and skinny.

The arms, legs and head look great!
However, I will have to agree with the critique that the body is too skinny. The front of the body looks good, at least for me. The back, in my opinion, needs to have more armor though.

Edited title for capitalisation and spelling - Chilly

Ill fix the body and I have no idea what towergirls is so… but I agree that they have a similar color scheme.

This looks somewhat unnatural, which actually helps the Moc.

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@LurkingEhlek Thank you. that was what i was going for.