I believe you should have some symmetry with the armor, and just… make it bigger. The Avohkii breaks the colorscheme and so does all of the black being used.
I recommend working on the color distribution. You should also ditch the black bones/armor. What CCBS armor shells do you currently have at your disposal?
The only chest armor I have is black and gun metal and the only bones I have are black, I can fix the rest of the black though. @Takua I can replace the Avohkii with a stars hau. And I’m kinda limited with my ccbs parts so I can’t really make it bigger.
Can’t really see much of a MOC in this seeing as it’s literally just a CCBS build with an Avohkii slapped on. Concept is cool…execution is a bit on the weak side. I’m a bit iffy on the color distribution, but that’s nitpicky.
Please don’t take that as an insult. I haven’t seen your collection. I don’t know what you have. I’m just noting that it’s a very basic build.
Colour could use some distribution and if you want to keep the colour scheme good you could just add some silver on him to make it one of his colours. That’s what I always do.