Un’Jaguk, Toa of Metal V11

Hi everyone, Un’Jaguk here!
This is Un’Jaguk, my first real self M.O.C. I will be posting a new self M.O.C shortly, as my secondary one. C&C are as always welcome and appreciated.

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HE looks a little thin, and his legs seem a little short compared to the arms.

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His legs are really short and spindly compared to the abnormally bulky shoulders. The waist is, to be honest, really ugly, with it being a stick basically. And I think the arms should’ve stayed silver, because the mismatched colors looks bad.

That being said, I really like the asymmetrical vibe, specifically with the horns. The cloth idea you got going is nice, and for the most part the colors are consistent.

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Make the torso shorter and the legs longer.

@TheMOCingbird
@Axels
@Jakanader

I’ve tried making the torso shorter and the legs longer between versions, it looks terrible. All other compliments and complaints are valid though.

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Right now it just looks like a mid-sized titan set placed on legs from the standard hero build. If it looked terrible the way you were doing it, maybe just try to use a completely different build.

Oof. But you have a point I must admit.

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Metal as in music, or metal as in the element, because he looks he could be either or?

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Element but thank you

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Put him in some action poses please

No prob bob

He skipped leg day a bit too much.