Unnamed Moc

Jack_Frost · January 21, 2016, 2:33am

This is a little unnamed moc that I made a while ago and and I decided to take some photos of it and post them here on the boards

Comments and criticism are welcome

Jemoph · January 21, 2016, 2:39am

looks alright but slightly odd. Hands look decent. Joints in the limbs seem to be the worst part and the waist’s too thin. Otherwise just clean him up abit and he looks perfect!

Hawkflight · January 21, 2016, 2:48am

After my “Scrap it and start over” comment on your last MOC, I will say

This is more in the right direction. The head especially is well-done.

Still, as @JMP said, it’s happy and a bit odd looking. Would advise you to go smaller still with your MOCs.

Pakari · January 21, 2016, 8:59pm

Head looks great, but the body feels off. The hands are nice, but a little too big, and his body and limbs seem too thin. You could perhaps give it more alien features to make the proportions feel more right for the character rather than being a simple humanoid.

Jack_Frost · January 21, 2016, 9:01pm

thanks for the feedback and I agree with you on the limbs being to thin I’ll try to fix those things up

Bionicdeadpool · January 22, 2016, 7:05pm

Woah, look at those blue pins!

I must summon the wise and powerful @Eljay

BorisTheBonkle · January 22, 2016, 8:00pm

The torso is a bit too thin, but otherwise great! Have you considered building up some backstory and submitting it for the brotherhood of makuta project?

darkbrick999 · January 22, 2016, 10:25pm

I love the head and, if I was to make one suggestion, remove the blue pins.

Jack_Frost · January 23, 2016, 12:27am

thanks for all the feedback guys

legomaster1378 · January 23, 2016, 1:29am

I like the odd look you’ve got going and the spikey textures but the thin waist doesn’t work that well. The forearms are fine but the waist looks very odd. In fact, the entire lower half doesn’t look nearly as good as the upper torso and head, which are great.

Jack_Frost · January 23, 2016, 1:32am

I completely agree with you on the lower half, I’m probably just going to rebuild it to try and make it look better

legomaster1378 · January 23, 2016, 1:34am

Looking forward to seeing updates!

Jack_Frost · January 23, 2016, 1:55am

thanks

legomaster1378 · January 23, 2016, 1:57am

BTW, I recommend being careful about blurred photos. Some of the ones up in the topic post are a bit fuzzy. Also, when you post updates I recommend posting them as a new post and updating the topic post with at least one pic at the very top. You want the first thing people see to be the best and most current version so that they’ll appreciate and critique accordingly.

Jack_Frost · January 23, 2016, 1:59am

thanks for the advice