I recently made a new creation, he is one of the ancient disaster shoguns, he possesses the ability to control blizzards. Here are some pictures.
Hope you like it.
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Iād recommend removing the trans lime green/yellow.
It isnāt distributed well.
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Iā¦ donāt like the lime-green.But you made thre trans-blue look very good!
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At first I thought it said snow shotgunš But then I grew a brain and saw the name right
This is really cool I like the torso the best but the hips are a little bit out of placeš
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the lower torso add on piece looks a little weird, outi and bulky
but sorta like it
P.S You could try a neon green for the eyes
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@Joe, Iāve considered it.
@Radiation-7901, thanks!
@enderfriend01, Hehe, thanks for the recommendation.
@doomrider, thanks.
It looks good, but like others said the trans neon green doesnāt fit very well. Otheriwise itās nice.
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@enderfriend01 hahaha same
The omits armor on the crotch looks out of place, as well as the trans-neon green on the model.
I would recommend removing both.
Otherwise, nice work.
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Simple, and a little contrasty but I like it!
Nice job!
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Looks above average.
Though you should try to switch out the torso with Skull Warriorās Torso.
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Its average. The arms are bad
A little to many translucent elements,but still a very impressive build.
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I donāt mind the trans-yellow-green all that much, as there is some of the same color in the chest add-on piece, but I wish that perhaps some of the color were distributed on the upper arms, under the armor if at all possible, so the inclusion of that color in the lower half of the body doesnāt feel so out-of-place.
I also think the back of this guy could use some armoring up. Thereās a few axle-holes here and there, why not utilize them? I do like the construction of the back, though, and the way it gets those trans-light-blue spider-leg parts to stick out at the angles they are. They almost kind of look like giant icicles, and I like that for a snow-themed character.
I like how this guy looks from the front. The trans-light-blue armor near the shoulders really helps make those spider-leg/icicles look like they belong, or at least like theyāre growing out of this guy, and again, I like that.
I also rather like how you have utilized those āUnityā pieces for the upper arms. They work rather well for custom builds, and the arms look fairly solid.
Iām not sure Iām a fan of the crystal pieces on the lower legs, but for an ice theme, I suppose they work. I know Iām not a fan of the foot spikes, though, and I think perhaps, if you have them, silver feet would work better with the color scheme.
Itās not a terrible creation, in fact, there are a lot of things on Usyuru (how do you pronounce that? Iām kind of having fun sounding it out) that I really rather enjoy, though I bet with a little tweaking here and there, the Snow Shogun could be even mightier. 
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Doesnāt really remind me of a shogun. The bone torso plate doesnāt help, given that the shogun usually wore bulky armor. I do quite like the shoulder design though.
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@Styrofoam, if you could do better, than why not leave a tip? If you do not like a design, why not strive to improve it?
@Folk, thanks, glad you like it.
@CirkitPurple, thanks for the detailed explanation, I appreciate your constructive criticism. (Itās pronounced Oo-syoo-roo) I just really appreciate the thought you put into your response.
@Yveran, Good point, thanks though!
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The green isnāt distributed that well.
Oh, and something else.
You could say heās a Snow-gun.
/s
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iām actually going to apologize here, i was mad earlier today and absolutely seething when i wrote that. i was just trying to find something to put down. the moc is pretty cool; i like it. i do, however, dislike the wrist poseability restrictions, and i would also change the elbow connection due to the awkward look of the thing. Again, sorry for my rudeness earlier. it wonāt happen again.
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