Windfall's MOC topic

That gravity one is awesome…

To name a few

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These are all super awesome and such. but the psionic Toa…her upper arms look…bad.

sorry to be so blunt.

Well since I’ve finally been getting the kind of critique I’ve dreamed of for months but haven’t gotten (CoughMocpagesCough), I’ve revamped Ansameli.
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These aren’t particularly spectacular. Mostly standard fare.

BUT.

They’re still pretty cool.

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Arms look a bit short, not a huge fan of the chest, and maybe give her some gold shoulder pads?

Aeza’s perportions are pretty wierd.

By

I meant that the legs are as wide s the foot. As in, the back of the leg to the front. Not from the ankle to the hip. Sorry for the confusion.

Oh yeah, and Ansameli: definitely an improvement.

I really like that blue one.

Celuxa, Toa of Psionics (CBW Page)

Cyrax, Toa of water (Belongs to KylerNuva135) (CBW Page)

Jekax, mutated Toa of Plasma (CBW Page)

Karo, Toa of Magnetism (CBW Page)

Kielor, Toa of Ice (CBW Page)


Kovana, former toa of Earth, current Turaga of Earth (CBW Page)

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Although a little cluttered the plasma one is my favourite of this batch…

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You should’ve seen V1…

Kovana seems a bit feminine. I think it’s the chest.

Kovana is a woman.

Female Toa of Earth? Okay.

Caloric might have a strange relationship with Vanaru

The top two, and the bottom one, are the only ones that I really like. the rest just seem…ehrgh.

I dunno, boring or cluttered.

Exhibit A: Raptortalon commented on “Jekax v2”, 23rd of July, 2015, saying “Nice!”
Location: Mocpages

Exhibit B: Raptortalon commented on “Karo, Toa of Magnetism”, 6th of March, 2015
“Awesome! but the back armor seems kinda…tacked on…”
Location: Mocpages

Seriously Raptortalon. What happened?

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Depends on my mood.

dont get me wrong, these are good MOCs, just some of them are great.

Why, because they both wear the same mask?