looks super messy, and has a very long neck, also whats up with the random symbols
It is supposed to be glitch between stories
The neck is too long, and that description is REALLY, REALLY confusing.
It’s honestly hard to read, the symbols are annoying, and since you gave no PROPER backstory I don’t know what the people are talking about.
You didn’t give two story’s. You gave a description that made no since whatsoever.
It’s not a bad MOC, but the description certainly is.
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The neck is too long, plus this whole MOC greatly suffers from CCBS syndrome.
The long neck is definitely the greatest flaw of this MOC, but it also has problems with the proportions.
my eyes are burning from all that transcolours try to stick to one trans colour
The neck is a bit long.
Yeah I sort of got that already
Texas: The Lord of Candy
yeah the entire MOC is just a cluttered 2015 toa build with a bad neck connection and color scheme.
“I serve the Lord of Light, for the MOC is bright and full of neon”
looks pretty cool, but a bit gappy around the legs and lower torso
ok, so his body is made out of rock candy, his mother was a giraffe and his father was a man thing? For weapons he has a sword and a spider yo-yo? And for being a glitch of what ever your story is, it would nice if you could explain this moc in the description instead of just putting pictures up and having us people ask what we are looking at. Honestly trying to make green (trans) and blue (trans) work together is a hard thing to do so maybe try out blue and purple? Not make the moc look like a mov of Ekimu? Just something that makes sense from some kind of angle.
I did have a story in the description but everybody was hitting on it so I just took it down
is it possible you can tell me it so I can get a better understanding on the moc?
Sure summary. He’s ruthless evil lord Who has the power of light in his fingertips and can blind you of what is right and wrong and has everybody under his control to make a weapon to enhance his power of light to fry the whole world. Oh I forgot spider is his pet which anytime he dies the spider will live on get a new host and resurrect it’s master
I’m trying to go off the glitches as him in mind controlling me and was trying to free myself between every glitch. So between every glitch I was telling the truth about the Lord and I have glitches I was telling the lie
now I can’t stop thinking of the whole “Fry the whole world” as in deep frying the world. Um, I can see why people may have given back lash on the back story but its actually interesting. It just doesn’t fit with this moc. As a stereotype for an evil guy I would honestly just say make him look evil. He looks too nice for what he is supposed to be. I’d just say work on making him look evil or what ever and also work A bit more on that story. And maybe work more on your mocing skills because thats another problem right now.
That’s the point is that he isn’t supposed to be some stereo typical evil villain he supposed to look nice and trustworthy but then you realize that he’s the villain I just merely put a reverse roll from from the darkness being good in the light being evil this is a concept that nobody has ever done before
Because he wrote it like this:
Xesas a really goo#^@^He is so evil and he will save everyo-!@*^!(^He will fry the world and he is good.
haha, thats awesome