So here’s xorroawiork in progress and good news I’m actually going to accept critism on this one since I have a history with no doing so leave yoursuggestions
No need to be sorry. That is exactly what we were encouraging you to do. Take your time. One Moc at a time.
You got a pretty simple yet solid-looking base so far. However try to avoid using hands and feet as armor clip-ons to the limbs as it sticks out and looks gappy. Smoother armor would look better aesthetically
I like the system-built chest area you got going on so far. Keep on experimenting!