Zaikus The Fist of the Koiginka

"Stay Back let the Ko-Fist Do The talking"


Name: Zaikus
A.K.A: The Fist of the Koiginka/ the Ko-Fist
Element: Ice
Occupation: Ice Sculptor and Title Holder of the Champion of the Ring
Relations
Koano: Both from Koiginka and have a Friendly Rivalry

BIO
cant think of anything right now .Whaddon


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him without his Frost Gauntlets on

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Silver breaks the color scheme badly, looks very unproportional, and the arms without the gauntlets look very odd.

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The arms are for story purposes you will understand]

i also understand the silver ill change that to be the colour of the torso

I like the idea of the big fists, it's funny. smile

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It appears that I've been summoned.


Plural's Quick Review:

  • Color Scheme is pretty consistent
  • Legs are Meh
  • Torso looks Strange
  • Those Fists

I would give this MOC an overall rating of a 6/10.

Needs a Bit of Work wink

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Thank you now think of the hole those gauntlets can leave

I like it (kappa)

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the torso is odd

IMO i don't like it it just looks to odd.

but on critique i'd give it a 2/20

The gauntlets are a little big and, awkward. Maybe you could scale them down or make them flow better.

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His hips are too wide in proportion to his shoulders. The armor coverage is really poorly done. His forearms are way to short compared to his upper arms.

3/10 Needs more cowbell.

His forearms are for the stroy

aka I wrote the story around a flaw that I won't/can't fix. :wink:

If I were you, I'd keep the gauntlets, but exaggerate the upper half of the moc more. Don't disregard the bottom half but imagine; broad shoulders, armoured chest and giant fists.

Looks good. The arms are a bit stubby, but that is definitely offset by the gauntlets.