Gali is fine as a figure, but Nokama looks kind of fat (I know that this was based off of the set, but it’s still an issue, at least for me); the tarakava are also incredibly small compared to what they were like in the animations, but I could that this had to be done to keep the cost low.
The landscape isn’t too bad actually! The only thing that really bugs me is Nokama’s hut, but I get that it’s extremely hard to make round objects out of bricks.
Overall, not to bad! I wish you good luck in the contest, as well!