This is the Form Makuta took when sentenced to the hellish shadow real by the Angelic form of Mata Nui. Please give me criticism I can use rather than random stuff.
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Looks Nice butt there is a blue pin on the back and that feel relly out of plays
The chest feels a bit Square for a humanoid.
Edited Title for The Kids ~ The Archon
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It needs the purple! It has too much going on anyway, no offense.
@BioCreater The Blue pins there to hold his staff when he is on level ground
@Hutere I’m trying to fix that now but bohrok eyes are too small
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Um… What? If you’re going to give backstory like this, please elaborate a bit. Mata Nui, especially this “angelic” version of him, doesn’t have any place or relevance to G2, and the Shadow Realm has no relevance to G1, nor does the Mask of Control it seems he’s wearing. If you do have some story in your head, or somewhere else on the boards, please either tell us or link to it.
I don’t often say this, but I don’t like this MoC. The proportions are alright, but the colours are all over the place, the build is messy, the toes are mismatched, and, from what I can see of the spear/axe/whatever, it just looks like a technic blob. It also seems like you used two different MoCs with small differences and didn’t make that particularly obvious. The second version is marginally better, though. Sorry for being so harsh.
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Hmm, I think the biggest thing to do would be to limit him to one (maybe two) metallic colors. Having all three here looks messy. That and the legs are a little gappy.
I’m looking for a way to replace the silver but i like the shaping his arms have with the Onua shovel pieces and I am looking into the legs but keeping his current amount of pose ability is mildly slowing that
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