Pretty darn awesome. The blue pin and gunmental are a little distracting, however, and I feel as though the head should be a bit longer.
Which Xenomorph is this based on? It appears to be the 1986 warrior.
Woo, for once my fanboyism is useful.
If that's the source, then outside the few minor flaws I mentioned, this is amazingly accurate. The Warrior's also my favorite Xenomorph, so that does help.
Considering he literally said "I tried to in 2013" I think it's very likely the original was of his design.