So a few things I want to get out of the way for the Moc, I want to by trying a new kinda stat based and more organized layout for the post, and more importantly, I want to be trying to make larger less basic CCBS, basically making my mocs look more like the quality of my self moc.
ANYWAY ON TO THE MOC!
Name: Siekoura
Species: Toa
Gender: Female
Element: Psionics
Kanohi: Mask of Psychometry If anyone has a good name tell me
Personality: Passive
Title: “The Peacekeeper”
Weapons:
“Telekinetic Hammer”
A hammer bound together by psychic energy acting as a relay to the users mind to allow the user to move the head with much greater force by using their mind.
The head can also fire off stored psionic energy from its face.
“Energy Blade Buckler”
An ornate buckler that the user can project psionic energy onto it giving it a bladed edge.
In combat Siekoura can absorb an incredible amount of damage and unleash it back through her psionic abilities and tools.
Her teammates have given her the name of “Peace Keeper” for being able to settle arguments amongst her team, by using her empathetic abilities to find out how her team is feeling.
She’s quiet and collected, even in the midst of combat.
Though those closer to her know how to make jabs at her to fluster her and make her loose her composure.
Well thats my first test of this new organized style, tell me your thoughts on the moc and the presentation.
Right now I’m trying to start to define my characters a bit better and the universe they’re set in, though since I’ve never taken any sort of writing courses that will take some time.
Exactly what Xephix said. She looks so much like Ekimu that it makes me question the originality. Same colors, same shoulder armor, same mask, same shield, extremely similar hammer,.
This a really nice MOC! It’s very effective and the hammer is a very nice design. The only design I’d consider changing is the lower torso. It’s looks kind of inconsistant with the other colors.
I think it’d be best to replace the transparent blue, give it a different mask, weapons, etc to make it look less like Ekimu. The build is really good, I think if you were to give it like, mata blue and say, a Kakama or something, it could be a pretty great looking Toa of Psionics.
I think to avoid the Ekimu comparisons you should alter the weapons. The shield blade can work, but the hammer and the shield together is kind of Ekimu and Makuta’s thing. Would probably change the hammer’s design more or simply have a sword instead. Adding some lower back coverage would be nice if it doesnt obstruct movement.
