I really like this! Sure, it may be a simple build, but the proportions are good, the colour scheme is pretty solid.
The weapons are really cool and I like your mask choice. I honestly think that with a few small tweaks this guy could be great.
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Would you happen to have more CCBS bones in black? I think he would look better if his entire skeleton was one colour (it would help to unify the build.
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How about swapping out the orange pieces with silver ones? The burnt orange and regular orange clash a bit because they’re so close in colour.
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Finally, my biggest recommendation would be to pose your figure in front of a plain backdrop (a plain white table/wall will do). That would improve the presentation of your MOC tremendously. Your hand and the cluttered background currently get in the way of what we really want to see (the MOC). For example, lookat @LoganMcOwen’s CCBS Matoro revamp that looks really good because it’s posed well and isn’t competing with anything else in the picture.