I’m pretty much going through making update topics for all my MOCs at this point… Anyways next on the list is big boi Arkus. A lot of the changes are to his legs as well as texturing adjustments. He’s a lot more cohesive this time around, plus the photos are just better quality. Enjoy!
I like that you got rid of those small silver hooks that were previously on the left and right torso pieces. Those things looked out of place to me.
Not too sure about the trans-purple claw pieces on the chest though. It seems like most trans-purple is covered or underneath silver armour, whereas the claws cover the silver instead.
You make a good point yeah, I always kinda likes the X that it made over his chest but I’ll see what he looks like without them and consider changing it, thanks for the crit
I feel that the waste is a little too thin, maybe put pistons on both sides of the waste to give a bulky apperance to match the rest of the moc. or something like that, still great though!
those upper legs are pretty:
Thats a decent idea, but it would be very hard to integrate without looking tacked on I feel. Besides my original concept was to have a big beefy dude with cartoonish proportions, so I find that it doesn’t bug me as much as it normally would. I appreciate the feedback though
The purple highlights on this guy look great. I like how it also continues onto the weapon as well. My only problem is that it’s kind of hard to see the feet in some of the pictures
A major improvement. The addition of trans purple adds a bit more life to the MOC, and the bulky armor flows across the body much better. I’m not really big on the way those Takanuva blades look from certain angles on his arms, but this is good otherwise.
You know I was just looking over the photos a while ago and noticed the same thing, they’d never bugged me until now, but yeah I’m definitely gonna fix that. Cheers man
My only gripe with this moc is the way the forearm to hand transition looks a little too unnatural compared to the rest of the moc. The edge of that silver armor piece and the inward-facing hands don’t really mix too well in my opinion.
But as I said, that’s my only gripe with this thing. It looks stunning, and I love the cartoony proportions.
You’ve done it again Jayfa