Barraki, Mahri-Nui - ART ART ART! [Worldbuilding] [Pitch] [Art] [Character]

@Jon

Well, thank you once again.

Thanks for doing that, I believe we really need a story bible right now, or at least a timeline.
Thank you for clearing the relations between GB and the Toa, however, I believe we are pitching out the second Toa team, described in Bokarda’s megatopic, here. (under the name Toa Kanohi)

The Idea was that the Elemental Gods sent the second Toa team to deal with the Barraki, aswell as few other things from different pitches, and imprison them.

One solution that comes to my mind would be that the Matorans would already find the island with Karzahni’s prison, but be oblivious to it’s existence.
Thus, they would construct another prison on that island, thinking that the dangerous wildlife will do it’s job of preventing them from escaping.

Of course, it would be a great coincidence, but we have to start somewhere, hm?

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Another idea that I have considered is to NOT have Karzahni at all for the story. At least not in any influential way. Maybe he is on a completely different island than the Barraki are.
It would solve some problems, but, of course, some would arise.

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Thanks. I already started a project of small short stories, one for each of the warlords, to pitch out their personalities even further and show how they really behave.
Pridak already has a chapter, though, it’s dark… Probably very dark… But hey, that is what the Barraki were even in G1, werent they?
If there ever will be a comic to be written for G3, or a short story about the Barraki, I will gladly write it, if I have the chance. (Right, now I’m just expanding my ego…)

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