Bionicle: Chronicles of Sphera Nui

this story is supposed to revolve around my Mocs and acouple of lego origanal Characters, let me know if I spelled anything wrong. this goes over 2010’s final battle, but in my words. I tried giving a religious and mythical side to the story, like 2001, probably didn’t do very well.

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In tribute to the original BIONICLE story line.

Prologue:
In the Time before time…
Before our time, before Sphera Nui, there was Bara Magna. A desolate world filled with barbaric inhabitants that relied on primitive life styles, that is until the great spirit MATA NUI took pity on these beings and decided to give life to the desolate world of Bara Magna. Using a powerful Mask bestowed on the great spirit called the Kanohi Ignika, mask of life, he turned the planets sand to dirt and its molecular structure to inhabit plant life, to maintain a healthy environment for the original inhabitants.
Yet the great spirits brother, MAKUTA, saw this action from the heavens and was displeased, he believed that such actions were a form of weakness and stupidity. For he believed that he and his brother did not need to worry or even bother with lesser beings that held no importance to their cause. Makuta had always been jealous of his ‘better’ brother and saw an opportunity to destroy him once and for all.
To bring life back to Bara Magna, Mata Nui first had to reconnect the two moons AQUA MAGNA and BOTA MAGNA into one to provide the resources he needed to recreate the surface and structure of Bara Magna. Raising both hands into the sky, the great spirit created a gravitational pull, moving the two moons closer to the desert world. Mata Nui’s actions seemed to only last seconds as his brother came crashing down on top of him, ready for destruction! Causing the two moons to pull out of their recreated orbit…

The battle they had that day lasted a what seemed an eternity, and it did not concern just the two great spirits, Makuta had ordered his servants of the shadows to wipe out the inhabitants of Bara Magna. But every shadow follows light, or in this case light followed shadow. Because two mighty warriors, Toa called – TAHU NUVA and TAKANUVA somehow escaped the prison of Makuta had put and help aid the battle against the master of shadows. Seeing through the commotion Mata Nui saw Toa Tahu bravery and bestowed upon him an incredible gift – THE GOLDEN ARMOUR, this Armour granted immense power, so powerful that a single Toa could turn the tide of any battle!
Tahu, using the golden Armour, destroyed all the evil sons of Makuta, the brother of the great spirit felt this, causing his immense strength to fail him, weakening him. seeing this, Mata Nui used this opportunity to push Makuta into the loaming, off course moon, Bota Magna. This action rocked the universe, Makuta’s head came crashing into the large moon, causing his brain generator, optic sensors and his dark will to dissipate, to die. His gigantic body came honing down into the sand and rock of Bara Magna. The great spirit Mata Nui was victorious! And yet his energy was running out, he had been damaged beyond repair, he would have to sacrifice himself to fulfill what he had set out to do. Acknowledging this he shifted the two moons back on the right course, once they formed chaotically with the larger planet, Mata Nui used the last of his power and the energy of the mask of life to recreate Bara Magna into Spherus Magna! The giant body of Mata Nui disintegrated, leaving all but the kanohi Ignika untouched, the population of the newly formed Spherus Magna, crowded around the mask in wonder of the golden object. Tahu and Takanuva pushed their way through the crowd, then it spoke with the voice of the great spirit:
“The Great Beings,” said Mata Nui. “They vanished 100,000 years ago, not long after creating me. They were tormented by guilt over what they knew would happen to Spherus Magna, and their role in causing it. Find them … tell them the planet is whole once more … convince them to share their gifts with you. I learned what it can mean to have friends, not subjects; allies, rather than workers or soldiers. Perhaps they can do the same.”
Mata Nui life was weakening; with all the energy he had left, he spoke these final words:
“The time has come,” said Mata Nui. “All journey’s must come to an end, but this time, there is a new beginning as well. There will be challenges to face and enemies to fight, but I know you will overcome. All that has gone before, my friends, has only served to give birth to this new day. “Let unity, duty and destiny be your guides. Be well, be strong, care for this world and for each.”
The light faded from the Ignika, the Mask faded as if it were dying, Tahu picked it up, examined it, thinking that he and other heroes had fought, even gave their life for this strange mask. Tahu finally looked across to see the inheritance called AGORI helping Tahu’s people the MATORAN out of the body of Makuta. Tahu the glanced at the Agori looking at him, he finally spoke saying:
“Come, my friends,” he said, at last. “It is time to go.”
That my brothers and sisters, is the end of the greats spirits story, and the start of our adventures on Spherus Magna and our glorious city, Sphera Nui…

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Ignoring the typos and grammatical errors, this was an enjoyable summary to read- though the lack of anything “Sphera Nui” related thus far was surprising if understandable. perhaps some insight or additional commentary from the narrator that ties in your actual story, the Chronicles of Sphera Nui, to the standard, canon ending of Bionicle might have set this apart more from other re-treads of what is covered here. Other than that, the pictures are a welcome addition and well done, and your unique writing style will most likely come unto it’s own with more practice.

It’s unfortunate that works in the literature section rarely get the attention they deserve, and without feedback of any kind, motivation to write most often dries up. But continue! I’m interested to hear more, as are many silent others.

thank you for the feedback! I admit that it might be some time until I release the next chapter, school has away of annoying people, I actually took a little inspiration form Nova Orbis series, If you don’t know what that is check it out! and I am pretty excited to continuing the chronicles as soon as I can. and thanks again for taking the time for reading this piece of literature!

Cool! I will read the full story! Where are the other topics?

huh, I’ve still got to do the other topics yet, iv’e just been busy with school work and stuff. but I appreciate the concern and interest

Yes, I really want to see them.