This is my First Moc posted on the message boards. i tried to make this Moc all out of G2 bionicle parts, i really like how this turned out and i hope you do as well.
let me know what you think of my creation
(scroll down to the last picture to see the first version )
after a lot of thinking i put together version 2.0 i based this version on the feedback that i was given on 1.0 . hopefully this is an improvement and i’d like to read your feedback.
It’s cool. I like that tail 
thank you ^^ , when i was making the tail i wasn’t really sure if it
was the best thing to do but i think i did alright
I dunno, to me this guy looks like a jumbled mess. The tail is a good addition, but the blaster at the end doesn’t flow well with the rest, and seeing the hands connect the wings feels awkward to me.
Bionicle Winged Skull Warrior… hmmm…He looks more like a Skull Swordsman to me.
This is not good thing, being completely honest here. You want to have your MOC be able to support itself with it’s feet. If you need the tail to help support it, there is something wrong. How you fix this is completely up to you.
So what do I think of this creation? It needs some work.
First thing is that the legs are asymmetrical in the wrong way. I can understand wanting to do the missing armor look, but the legs need to be consistent with each other. Here they just look mismatched. It doesn’t matter what you go with, just try to make the legs matching.
Second thing is the color scheme. If you are going to use complementary colors (the trans-orange and trans-blue), you need to make it more balanced. I don’t see enough Trans-orange in the MOC to justify it being there. There is nothing wrong with going with that color scheme, it just looks out of place if it is not balanced properly.
The Wings: I suggest replacing the HF hands. It makes them look like he has another set of arms holding those axe weapons. Otherwise the wings are alright.
I would also recommend replacing the blaster with a blade, but I’ll let you decide what to do here. either one works, it just that I think a bade would be more fitting for the tail. Also you should probably use something other than the limb bones. Tails are extensions of the spine, so something like the standard CCBS limb piece would be more fitting. But either way I like the idea of a tail on a skull villain.
So as I said: This needs some work. It certainly does have potential and I would love to see how you can improve this as time goes on.
thank you so much for your feedback , iam gonna try to make a a better improved version
i might post pictures in a bit
EDIT : be sure to checkout version 2.0
Wow, version 2.0 looks awesome. Definitely an improvement from version 1.0.
This looks good. Nice improvement there also.
I really like the colours and the build of the MOC!
It’s kinda like Warrior, Basher, Satan and Batman all got together and had a baby…
I got to admit this looks great.
Better than the original one.
This is quite neat
Nicer than 1.0, defiantly. This looks like it could have been an actual sold set.