Board Member Haikus

Okay!

“Yo! Legomaster 1378! he can count his ABC’s and say his 123’s! his voice is deep and so is his drawers so when he MOCs ya’al better bewar!”

I suk…

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That sounds like rapping…

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Same thing…right??

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You have one too many syllables there.
I think you meant: “So don’t worry 'bout me”

It has 5 syllables.
I counted it already many times and it’s perfect.

Original line[quote=“RECspiriah, post:38, topic:8282”]
So don’t worry about me.
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Onyx’s correction[quote=“Onyx_Pro_Undescorepire, post:44, topic:8282, full:true”]
You have one too many syllables there.
I think you meant: “So don’t worry 'bout me”
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REC’s response to Onyx[quote=“RECspiriah, post:45, topic:8282, full:true”]
It has 5 syllables.
I counted it already many times and it’s perfect.
[/quote]
Marendex’s reasoning
So (1) don’t (1) wo-rry (2) a-bout (2) me (1)
1+1+2+2+1=7

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I’ve been found out!
smokebombs the heck outta dodge

My secret revealed, I can’t even count on my fingers

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Okay.
Here’s the new version:

@RECspiriah

Nothing here but fail.
Just recording stuff right now.
So don’t fret for me.


Thanks @Marendex_T17!
For pointing out my mistake.
Must’ve messed it up with my homework.

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@Pot8o
Our ■■■■■■■■■■ friend
He has an obsession with
Cory in the House

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@Mesonak
He played MNOGII
No one thought that he would win
But he showed them all.

@John_Smith
He is quite clever
winner of mafia games
he solves everything

@Nyran
some call him Ngram
Once he went by @yran
People say he’s cool.

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@Ekorak
He cannot torso
But his legs are glorious
As are his colors

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@Oniwah

he greeted me here.
he has muscles.
that are not real…

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you sure are lucky
that cory in the house had
five syllables huh?

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@legomaster1378
House filled with Lego bricks
Does naught but make haul videos
His voice is so deep

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I heard people say
“It’s snowing on Mount Fuji”
I really don’t care

@RaptorTalon19
So RaptorTalon
You should go look up what is
haiku rhyme structure

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When you make haikus
Try to not end your lines in
middle of sentence


@yran
ALL HAIL THE YRAN
HIS WORDS FOREVER GUIDE US
WE FOLLOW HIS LEAD

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This right here, is the best one.

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Oh so close, Hawkflight.
There are six syllables in
the second’s last line.

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There were at the time
But then I removed one word
So it should be fine.

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@Eljay
Thinks blue pins have sweg
unaware that miru is dumb
I ate all his sets

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