Thank you for your opinion. I will try to fix some of the plot holes and make a new thread.
But I will not have an internet connection from today to Monday because I’m going to visit relatives and my grandfather does not have a computer.
Okay, I did what you told me and I made Topic and changed that Karzahni was not aware that his Matoran are no longer on the island.
But until I get a little more information of the plot holes in my story, I can not change anything else.
Here is a link to Topic