so recently i went to the seaside and took some photos of this moc.
Story: He is one of the Hagah of the Makuta known as Dhampyr, who chose to use two shields instead of a shield and spear or something.
So, Constructive Criticism would be appreciated!
I like the two different colours on each side of the body a very unique design and there shield double is quite intriguing to say
very different weapon combo it reminds me of captain America a lot tho
very nice
I like the split metallic colors contrasted against the black of the rest of the moc
I’m a fan of that leg design.
The moc has a whole is pretty unique-- I’ve never ever seen a character wield two shields this way, but I like it!
I hope you enjoyed your time by the sea 
Thanks!
For a moment i thought that was an ice pun and i nearly fainted
It’s february so it’s still freezing but it was nice
… for a stone toa?
Although if it were ice I would totally have done that
Yeah now that i think about i’m just paranoid about ice puns
Maybe you should just chill out. 
OH My GOSH rukah STOOOOOP🤣
Don’t worry to bad about it Mr heyzorks i know what that feels like trust i do
I do one constructive feedback
If you add some armor pieces to the lower body it may look more complicated as of right now it look a bit incomplete if you add armor to the lower body there be no problems with the top 
EDITED FOR TRIPLE POST - Spiderus Prime
Another relatively clean and put-together design. My immediate suggestions would be a bit of modification on the forearms, the current armor design isn’t the greatest.
Never! 
Ok, but what if i like the forearm design?
then keep it. It’s your MOC, and my suggestion. That’s what critique is.
I really like the silhouette of the build!
Well done Zork very good
