Celestral The Creator

Celestral is the rival to Nibiru The Chaos Lord

Celestral created the elements to do her job because creating those elements weakened her. I based her round TFP primus, Ezra Scarlet and gundam Exia

if you want to know more about her and Nibiru there will be an explanation





and now some size comparisons with Nibiru


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This MOC is great, but the yellow looks out of place.

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cause there is no parts that are gold

and gold is a type of yellow

This.
Very much this.

I would just switch the yellow for black. It wouldn’t take away from the overall look because of the amount of gold on the torso already.

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awesome body and legs but i really dont like the head and arms, the head is too abstract for my taste and also the arms just dont fit the layered texture of the rest of the moc.

It is indeed a pretty good MOC, but it does have its flaws.

Could you change the yellow on the waist to white or black? It’s very distracting and just looks out of place. The legs are really bulky and look odd on the top and bottom, and really skinny in the center, which is weird.

The arms look a bit lanky but not bad.

That’s my two cents.

The feet look way too big, and as said earlier the yellow looks out of place.

Also the torso seems to be really blocky.

Otherwise, good work! :slight_smile:

acually they’re not look closly and you see they are quite small an optic allusion so to speak

@Invader shes meant to look like it the small bio gives a big hint

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Actually you’re right about that, but they still look a bit odd.

thats the point look at loads of transformers some have the same feet/leg design

It looks good, its just that the amount of studs on the back give a big of a texture clash, that and the yellow are the only problems I have with this otherwise GREAT moc

so you just want the back to be pure black then

I believe you mean optical illusion
Allusion means something completely different

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i cant spell ok i have problem spelling theres no need to be rude

“I’m not the best at spelling, so thanks.” would have been a more appropriate response, he isn’t trying to be rude.

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I wasn’t being rude
I just pointing out a spelling error. It was completely helpful in nature

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To me, personally, it really feels like both mocs were inspired by some of Alieraah and Shadowgear’s more recent mocs. They’re pretty good mocs, but they just give me that feeling.

i finished the moc yesterday as Alie’s lady void moc was up loaded
so Celestral isnt inspired by Lady void

as for Nibiru he wasnt inspired it happened to look the same cause i was experimenting with parts

and besides Shads and Alies latest mocs are a council my MOCs are Gods creators of the universe besides BOTH Celestral and Nibiru are planetsized beings.

heres a refrence take Jupiter the biggest Planet in our solar system, take jupiter and times its size by 8 thats how big Celsetral and Nibiru are they are HUGE

But what exactly does that have to do with the argument?