CHC: Civil War

Been thinking this up for a while, then piloted the idea to @Nyran.
He gave it a yes, so I decided why the heck not.

WARNING FOR LANGUAGE THOUGH, FOLKS

Language is mild, not too extreme but it is used.

Link (Yes, I'm using Wattpad. Call me a tumblr SJW all you want now): http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/40499721-chc-civil-war

All of the everything is appreciated. Though more so constructive critisisim.

The original pilot transcript thing can be found here (It wasn't finished however, as I didn't get time to set out all of the everything):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KeA0937JitykLv7NeUrM4ufEWpKtyZ91kUR-Dh52C20/edit?usp=sharing

The series is still on going, of course. But I'll try to update as frequently as I can.

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Someone is going to die to death.
And it's not going to be Risebell who doesn't die.

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Wait
its not going to be you who doesn't die?
so
you are not going to not die?

by that you mean

you are going to die?

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That is the joke. Yes.

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its not a very good one.

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very interesting, I wonder who this vigilante is

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People are gonna hate me.

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hahaha scrub.

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i died

rip slime

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I can't read it because I can't sign into Wattpad
frowning

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Last part of CH3 and first part of CH4 up, featuring:
@Payinku, @CompleteZero, @Takua, @BlazingMeteor, @Mr President because I don't know his boards name and it's confusing.

Also a nifty surprise character lmao.

The office also always has this playing:

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MR PRESIDENT YOU MIND SOME ELECTRIC GUITAR?

@Sovereign

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Y'all rang for me?

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New chapter and such
http://www.wattpad.com/133859825-chc-civil-war-let%27s-do-the-time-warp-again-ch4-p2

Bit of a set up here, as has been most of the story so far.
Soon though.
Soon you getter get those throat syrups ready.

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Remember when I said it's about to get real?
Yeah.
Bit on the middle with that.

http://www.wattpad.com/134526860-chc-civil-war-heroes-ch0p1/page/2
http://www.wattpad.com/135103829-chc-civil-war-villains-ch0p2

Featured: @Takua @KyoryuYellow1138
I freaking love writing as Takua, it allows me to take all my rage, insanity and evil, then stuff it into a jar made of human organs.

This chapter is the one I really want some advice/reviews on. As this chapter is my favourite, and one that was the most fun to write. It's purpose was to kind of set the mood for everything else.

So yeah, on this particular set, Constructive Criticism please.

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now thats edgy af

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<3333

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http://www.wattpad.com/135948792-chc-civil-war-who-to-call-ch5-shadezy

With my boys @Ice, @Pot8o, @Booster_Gold and most prominently, @Shadezy , wherever he is.

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Finally I am app-
:C

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I am included-ish in something. yee
C:


Wait. What is nightcrawling, and how is that my job?

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