Chronicles of Okoto (G2 Prequel Fanfic, Updated)

So, this winter/Christmas break I’ve had far too much time to write and rewrite my fanfiction.
Anyhoosers, linkity link-

When you’re done reading, tell me what you liked, what you didn’t like, what you think could be better, or something that generally stood out for you. I’ll be sure to update this as regularly as I can, so stay tuned for that! Or don’t, that’s… that’s fine with me… my self esteem doesn’t matter anyways…
PS- If the link doesn’t work immediately, try downloading it! :smile: