I feel like both of these need their posture reworked a bit, particularly Gali. It looks like she in particular has a full-out hunch back. It looks odd, particularly on a female character. For Lewa, I think it would be an easy fix just taking the back plate off and rearranging it. Gali needs her back completely reworked; it’s too hunched and too gappy from the sides.
All and all, Gali needs work. Lewa can use a bit of revision but is alright.
For those of you who critiqued the gaps on Gali, I have since remedied that. Pictures will be added soon!
I have also reworked Lewa’s arms, replacing the lower arms with the smallest CCBS bones. It evens out the proportions and gave me four ball joints for…something else…
These are the updated ones I posted on MOCPages, but I have changed bits and pieces of them since then!