This is my second shot at a Lego minifig-scale mech, and shares a few minor elements with the first one, but I would consider this better than the other in every way.
Dude, you’ve improved so much in such a short amount of time.
And that’s cool, because you were still really good before.
And I still haven’t… (improved)
It looks great but the smoothess of the body armor does sorta conflict with the “greeblyness” of the “jet armor”, the “skull armor” and the technic beams. But I it looks real cool
i see too many gaps and the armour from general grevous doesnt flow as nice maybe some more armour to fill the gaps and some dark trans blue on the legs. and what is with the red pis showing, maybe if they were hidden but they stick out like a sore thumb.
Lose the red pins and add more gunmetal armour, dark trans blue studs and fill in the gaps
Which is fine, except for your limbs don’t fit that vibe at all. I’m going to take the seemingly unpopular route and say that the torso is fine, and that you should add more technic to the legs and arms to match.
IMO, the lower arms are weak, and the upper arms aren’t much better. Also, I think using these feet instead of the beast feet would be a better match, both in style and color scheme:
