Not bad. The pose is dynamic. Maybe add a backdrop and make the golden mask a bit more prevalent if you want to redo it later.
I acctualy do want to redo it, i just need to get up,ake this, but bit better pose and do an photo!
If you use an image editing program, select the gold using the color picker, then set the opacity down you can add a nice glow effect.
I like how the light's hitting the skull spider.