I thought i might take my mocing in a different direction, i decided to build Characters from an online comic called Dreamkeepers ( http://www.dreamkeeperscomic.com/GNSaga.php?pg=1 ) it is a good read.
This is a pretty good representation of the character, and on its own it’s a good MoC.
The way you positioned the hordika neck pieces looks weird. It just looks really odd for the elbow joint to stick forwards like that.