Finally decided to upload my first major MOC, Echo
He was once a simple soldier to an army until a demonic virus hit the population, killing most of his team, except for him. He was mutated with his bone changing shape and pointing out of his skin causing him immense pain. He know hunts the man who caused this and won’t rest, recording the last words of every man he trusted, so that when the day comes, he can finally be the echo that kills the monster.
It took me a while to make a body and legs which I was happy with, (Am I to picky?) but I finally made something I was happy with.
Posed shots:
Back shot:
Weapon:
Comparison:
I still need to work on a few things but I’m happy for now. Critique’s are welcome!
P.S. Thanks @Robotics for helping with the images and @AwesomeJoel27 for incidental inspiration!
This is pretty neat mate
Thanks! 
No problem
I like the red arm.
I’ll admit, when I heard the name echo I was expecting a toa of sonics or something else sound based, but he looks pretty cool.
I like it, I think the system pieces are a nice touch.
Is this a bad creepy pasta? why does the virus have to be demonic? how is a virus demonic if it was caused by a man?
Okay enough nitpicking.
I really do like the way the red arm looks, it looks painful to even move.
But the images are too small for me to see much TBH.
And the shoulder armor and mask remind me of something I made…
And the name…
Looks like I should be suing…
/s
But really tho the MOC is really cool
the friction axtenders make the connection between the waist and thigh look skinny compared to the rest of the body. I would either remove it or add some armor around it
The lower legs seem kind of odd and the stomach area of the torso could use some work but cool concept and a good start to what could be a great MOC.
I honestly think the MOC is alright, but I couldn’t care because that story
that story has potential
Ill probably end up making a new post with his updated self and a better story.
I made it from scrath in like 5 minutes so…
Alright. Got a new phone with a better camera and changed quite a bit, so I think it’s time I upload some images of him.
New backstory:
As a child, his village was constantly being attacked as he thought, with his city ruler telling them it was to try and capture and enslave them. With this thought drilled into his head, he bolted at the opportunity to be part of the defense against the attack. Unknown to him was the fate of those who where like him. Once he left his family in hope of bringing honor, he was tortured till breaking point and had his left arm mutilated till bone was piercing his flesh. After several years of this hell, he was finally sent to fight, but only saw simple peasants, trying to ward them off with sticks and stone. He then realized he was manipulated into a soldier for taking over, rather than a last defense. He ran straight towards his home, in search of forgiveness, but only found destruction and death, with the whole place torched down. The only one alive was dying on the door step of his now ash house, and said three words before going limp. With his brother now dead in his arms and his family’s ashes scattered in the house, he now hunts the man who caused him his wrong doing. He will bring down what he he gave so much faith for. He will now be the echo that kills the silence of his people.(Am I still bad at stories?)
A few posed shots:
Back shot:
I feel like I need to do work on the back and legs, but I don’t know what.
(also soz for stuff in background, only place with decent lighting ;-;.)
Critiques are very welcome.