Please give real criticism of the build so far.
This is pretty good. Could use a little work here and there. Specifically in the vault door. It seems kinda small. But other than that this is really good.
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Thank you for your critique i am planning on completely rebuilding and expanding that part of the build.
Edit:here are some close ups of the door
Edit2: thank you that is actually what i originally planned for the door but it became out of scale with the rest of the build so i down scaled it ill try to find a way to make it work
Edit3: @miraku thank you i am planing to add more to the build in terrain i just dont want it to be too cluttered.
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Yeah, now that I loom at it, the door needs to be a lot larger. Not only in overall size, but in thickness as well. I’d say at least one or two studs, as aposed to the panel width it has now.
Edit: Alright. So the width is good. Maybe a bit thicker, but it’s fine for what it is. But as far as overall size, it does need to be significantly larger. At least one and a half minifigures.
@ThePlaguedDude
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I haven’t played the game, but the vault in the dune looks really nice as well as the dune itself, which has some good shaping. I think you should add some more small terrain to the area in front of the vault. You could also add some olive green shrubs to break up the drab color scheme.
EDIT: What I meant was to add a few plates and tiles here and there to vary up the texture.
UPDATE~1
Things added-
1.tiles to the terrain to give it more detail
2.new building
3.new minifig Scavenger!
4.slightly updated road.
things to expect in next update
1.revamped vault!
2.dogmeat
3.more terrain
4…update the dead tree.
EDIT~1 forgot to show destroyed car
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Love it.
'Was half anticipating yet another low quality Fallout Moc like the countless i’ve seen but this isn’t bad at all.
Photography is a bit iffy but totally not a deal breaker.
All in all I look forward to where this is going.
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The door could be bigger. I guess that’s all I have to say. Where is the Vault supposed to be?
A small vault door (OK a bit bigger than this but not huge) would be pretty typical for a vault in california.
The desert thematic seems to indicate somewhere in the west considering the FO west became a nuclear desert.
(ironically the areas in the west that didn’t were already deserts)
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Alright, makes semse, and I was just curious since the Vault doesn’t have a number, and if he intended it to he in Nevada or California. Or even somewhere that wasn’t previously explored in a canon game. for instance I have a moc set in Colorado.
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