Flash Fiction practice

Im currently halfway through a creative writing class, and a couple weeks ago we had a flash fiction practice, where we had 10 minutes to write something based off of any one of a set of images with our only other restriction being a word cap of 22.

Heres what I came up with, along with the prompt image:
image
Pacing along the stony beach,
you contrast, alone,
ostracized by reality for your thoughts,
just as they separate you from your body.

Definitely would appreciate some C&C so I can work to improve my skills, but otherwise enjoy

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Very nice. Both the picture and the poem are pretty good.

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