Testing nonexistent skill in artwork by sketching Gali. I set up the “studio”, and added the lighting , but it still looks like @haloblast took a massive crap in Mordor. Not meritable whatsoever, so please list as many detracting factors as you like; that’s all it has. XP
Edit: You guys actually liked this junk? Gee, the new age of humanity…~Pirean
I really like the body, but I feel the mask is a bit odd.
Calm down, buddy…
This is actually really good!
I like how much effort you put into the axe and how you replicated, if not added more, onto the weapon design…but you were forced to squish it up against the edge of the page 
Okay then…
Honestly, same opinion. As usual, I mind-crapped while trying to mimic the figure’s face. Angles can be frustrating.
Also, same goes for the ugly legs. The torso is the only part I can actually not cringe at.
Edit:
think the eyes on the mask are a little off
but other than that
welp, this is a thing.
Lemmie know if ya want an example on how to do a simplified form of Gali’s mask.
Eyes are strange, but other than that’s it’s a bit good-ish I guess.
/s it’s good.
The perspective seems a bit off on the mask and the eyes are a bit odd, but other than that, this is really well done.
The arms really bring Mask of Light Gali nuva to mind… I don’t know why
It’s okay, it is better than my art skills.
I might have to steal this phrase…
That’s actually really good, aside from the mask which is a little off.
Mask is a bit off but the rest is alright.
######still better than what I make
Pretty great the torso arms and legs look pretty good l, but the mask is kinda weird looking but other then that it’s pretty great
Awesome job!
You took the original set and enhanced it giving detail where detail is due, and simplicity where simplicity is due!
I especially like the weapon- it looks very clean, refined,and sharp!
(How did you do all this without smudging it?!)
First of all, this is terrible. I don’t see how “simplicity” has been used to enhance the sketch, and there’s an obviously vagueness.
Secondly, the weapon looks like crap. There are lines, but they aren’t cohesive as a weapon.
(Oh, and I smudged it the entire time. That’s why it sucks.)
Yea mate,
Ink before you shade.
I don’t know why your being so hard on yourself. This looks really good to me!
In my opinion you did a fine job preventing smudges (when I shade in pencil, there is almost always smudges!), and the weapon to me looks really defined! If you really elwant criticism, I could say the mask needs some work (it isn’t really symmetrical).
I hope you were joking about it not looking good, because it looks pretty good to me!
