An evil ghost demon thing in search of golden parts to make him all powerful not much story cause there’s an animation which I will be giving regular updates to
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This is actually pretty decent. The darkness limits my ability to see details but what I can see is an improvement on your prior MOCs.
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I can’t really tell what’s what in the pictures. From what I can see, the waist is far too wide and the open CCBS skeleton does not look pretty.
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I’d say that this is a very decent MOC, I’d give it a solid 6.5 of 10, my only complaint is the camera quality, but I can get over that. This is structurally very sound, but the thighs could use a bit of armour. Anyways, yu are improving, and that is very good to see! 
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It looks decent, I guess. The shoulders look okay and the lower legs are acceptable but the lower arms and thighs are too bone-y and do not in any way fit in. I would critique more but the camera quality is so poor it’s very hard to make out.
I actually quite like this. With some better pictures, it would be easier to judge.
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Hmm, I can’t really see much of the MOC as the place where you took the pictures is a bit too dark. Can you retake the pictures in a much lighter area, like under a lamp, a window, or outdoors?
I’ll be able to share my opinions on it then 