While the small aesthetic choices are pretty good, there are numerous flaws with the MOC that really make it look ■■■■■■■■■■■■■■. The head is quite small, the hips are too large, and the, ahem, bust looks quite awkward. However by bulking up the midsection I should think that would take care of most of the visual problems.
You’re actually the first person to say there’s something wrong with the body shaping. I do have the excuse that the proportions are “stylized” but i do admit the build quality on this moc has never been great.