Ibk king of karzahni

The Barraki, Nidhiki, Rakshi, Bohrok Kal, Mahri Ni Matoran, and Karzahnni were also all mutations. they all looked like they were actual beings

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This moc… i want people to improve…

First off: shark

Sharks have fins, like blood and have “large” teeth
Only thing that somewhat resembles shark is mistika hau with is fin on upper part

Mutations
This doesnt yealy look like any mutation possible after… you get the idea

Human can have mutations: Albinism, bonus limbs, lack of limbs… stuff like that

Colourscheme:
Base colour + limbs and stuff filled with elemental energy… there is alot you can do

Feet:
Stability? You can do better than adding giant plate to an foot

Gaps:
Gaps

Weapons:
There is alot you can do with idea of an crossbow and stuff

Anatomy:
Its useful, eaven for mutated characters (aka: whi is torso thin, and legs fat?

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Not to be rude, but its good idea badly executed… and im sure you can improove! =3

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^^^^^

And for once my thoughts on a MOC are exactly summed up by somebody else.

This has absolutely no color scheme and there is no excuse for that.

Unless you are making a Toa of Rainbows.

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I agree with pretty much everything said here. Ibk needs reworking.

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I like the shooter weapon, its a cool design and i feel if the rest of the MOC had a similar design then it would look amazing. At the moment my main gripes are simply the colours and the thinness of the body and the blue pin on the crotch armour.

Other than that i think its an alright MOC for a being that lives on Karzahni.

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This moc is a messed up moc so i will make update and this topic is ruined i destroyed moc to make a new on

Heres a pic of new version will post more pics as soon as i can

I like that.

I like it , it’s a Kronki wongi :smiley:

So its good now

moar pics pls

Yes please, without more pics, I can’t make out what’s what

You have to show us the whole thing first

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Ok ill try post pic tommorow for my birthday