Jayfa's MOCs - Updated Versions (Responding to Feedback)

[Jayfa]

Hey all, it’s me again. Been a while since i posted here, so I figured I’d show you all some updated versions of a few of my favourite MOCs. I took into consideration a lot of what you guys said in regards to my creations and tried to improve them Without further ado, I hope you guys like what you see.

First up is Jayfa himself

• Improved texture and greebling on lower legs and feet.
• Better colour balance between white and gold
• Extra coverage on hips
• Gold accents on reconfig. blades
  

Next we have Sage

• More vines to fill out empty or boring space
• Replaced weird thumbs with curved vine pieces
• Additional foliage on back tendrils
• Mushroom on right arm
  

And last we have Shadowstep

• Removed weird chest lumps in favour of flatter dish pieces
• Replaced awkward stun gun with low profile crossbow on right arm
• Added more greebling/texture to upper arms and legs
• Tail is now much longer
• Eyes now glow in the dark
  

As always I thank you all for viewing, if there is anything here that you like/dislike please let me know and i will do my best to improve these models further. Also I have provided links to the original topics for each MOC below if you feel so inclined to give them a look.

Bionicle MOC - Jayfa: The Reconfigurable Weapon Wielder

Hey guys, been meaning to share this for quite a while now. Introducing my self moc: Jayfa. He's been made mostly using bionicle parts but has a fair bit of system thrown in here and there for texture/greebling etc. He's been a work in progress for a long time and I'm constantly changing and updating him but i feel like he's finally reached a point which I'm happy with. The colour scheme uses almost exclusively white and light grey parts but has accents of gold scattered throughout. The overall feel that i went for was a sort of light themed warrior, and hence i took a bit of inspiration for the blades from Brickthing's Vos-Eon moc as i thought the idea to use these wing pieces as blades was really cool. The head, as well as much of the rest of the moc, is completely custom built and uses …

Bionicle MOC - Sage: The Evergreen Guardian

It's finally here! That new MOC I've been promising you all! This is Sage, The Evergreen Guardian. Sage is a peaceful forest spirit that nurtures all aspects of the natural world and serves as a protector against the forces that seek to ravage his homeland. Sage was an extremely fun and interesting build and was based of a concept I had been wanting to explore for quite a while, and that was to make a character that was a living embodiment of the forest itself. And true to this idea, sage contains many elements inspired by various aspects of nature. I.e. the leaves and foliage/vines sprouting off his body, branches and dirt, flowing water, as well as flowers and flower buds. You will also notice that Sage wields no weapons. I felt that after i had finished building him he simply looked too…

Bionicle MOC - Shadowstep: The Silent Assassin

Hello once again! Today I would like to show you all another new MOC of mine. This is Shadowstep (super edgy name courtesy of my good friend Davis). I made this guy the very next day after my last MOC: Sage, and I have to say i didn't really go into building this guy with any plan of how he was gonna turn out or even what the heck he was going to be. But this was the result, a stealthy, ninja-like character with a long whip tail and big ol' bat ears. This build started with the head (as I'm sure you could have guessed) and I'm quite proud of how it turned out, also please do excuse me for the various illegal techniques used here :^). Shadowstep: The Silent Assassin [image] Full Body Shots (Front, Side and Rear) [image][image][image] Head Closeups (Side and Front) [image][image] Upp…

[MakutaTexxidos]

IDubbbzTV - Hey, that's pretty good

I really love the black one. Pretty darn impressive.

[Tobin-Bartram]

Shadowstep is my favorite, all of them are pretty great though!

[Jayfa]

All this love for Shadowstep <3 thanks guys, also nice meme

[Ekorak]

Shadowstep’s pretty easily the best.

Also I’m incredibly jelly of your GITD eyes on him.

Might come back and do some more in-depth feedback when I have time. For now though, I’ll just say they’re all pretty good (and quite cute) but also suffer from being a bit too cluttered, especially Jayfa.

[Jayfa]

Thanks man, really appreciate it. And yeah I get the whole clutter problem, its a bad habit i tend to fall into, and its been very hard trying to rework Jayfa out of it, especially considering it was kinda his whole concept to begin with to be greebled to a ridiculous degree

Also its interesting that everyone likes Shadowstep the most, his original topic didn’t get nearly as much attention as the others initially
Btw he can do this which i think i probably should have mentioned

[Kopeke]

These things look amazing! I love the aesthetics.

[Xephix]

Really improved the last time I saw these mocs.

[Cocoa]

Nice MOCs! They all remind me of the Khan Academy Monsters, epsecially Shadowstep.

[Altair]

They look even awesomer than before!
The updates have improved the MOCs without changing the appearance too much,which is good.

Now the only problem is that 08 cracked socket on your self MOC’s shoulder…

[Jayfa]

Oh my haha, honestly never even noticed that, good thing its easy to replace

[Stoax]

Very nice, the designs of Shadowstep and Sage came out great especially.

[Leoxander]

Very nice.

[_el]

All improvements on your older mocs, jayfa probody improved the most(not you but you probably did) I like all of theese, total rating 9/10

[Jayfa]

Awwww cheers guys

[omega9998]

Wow, Jayfa, these are all amazing! I salute you.

[Jayfa]

Glad you like them man

[Runa]

These look amazing, Shadowstep’s my favorite.