Jayfa's MOCs - Updated Versions (Responding to Feedback)

Hey all, it's me again. Been a while since i posted here, so I figured I'd show you all some updated versions of a few of my favourite MOCs. I took into consideration a lot of what you guys said in regards to my creations and tried to improve them :slight_smile: Without further ado, I hope you guys like what you see.

First up is Jayfa himself
- Improved texture and greebling on lower legs and feet.
- Better colour balance between white and gold
- Extra coverage on hips
- Gold accents on reconfig. blades

Next we have Sage
- More vines to fill out empty or boring space
- Replaced weird thumbs with curved vine pieces
- Additional foliage on back tendrils
- Mushroom on right arm :stuck_out_tongue:

And last we have Shadowstep
- Removed weird chest lumps in favour of flatter dish pieces
- Replaced awkward stun gun with low profile crossbow on right arm
- Added more greebling/texture to upper arms and legs
- Tail is now much longer
- Eyes now glow in the dark

As always I thank you all for viewing, if there is anything here that you like/dislike please let me know and i will do my best to improve these models further. Also I have provided links to the original topics for each MOC below if you feel so inclined to give them a look.

http://board.ttvchannel.com/t/bionicle-moc-jayfa-the-reconfigurable-weapon-wielder/28464?u=jayfa
http://board.ttvchannel.com/t/bionicle-moc-sage-the-evergreen-guardian/29186?u=jayfa
http://board.ttvchannel.com/t/bionicle-moc-shadowstep-the-silent-assassin/29211?u=jayfa

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I really love the black one. Pretty darn impressive.

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Shadowstep is my favorite, all of them are pretty great though!

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All this love for Shadowstep <3 thanks guys, also nice meme

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Shadowstep's pretty easily the best.

Also I'm incredibly jelly of your GITD eyes on him.

Might come back and do some more in-depth feedback when I have time. For now though, I'll just say they're all pretty good (and quite cute) but also suffer from being a bit too cluttered, especially Jayfa.

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Thanks man, really appreciate it. And yeah I get the whole clutter problem, its a bad habit i tend to fall into, and its been very hard trying to rework Jayfa out of it, especially considering it was kinda his whole concept to begin with to be greebled to a ridiculous degree :stuck_out_tongue:

Also its interesting that everyone likes Shadowstep the most, his original topic didn't get nearly as much attention as the others initially
Btw he can do this which i think i probably should have mentioned

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These things look amazing! I love the aesthetics.

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Really improved the last time I saw these mocs.

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Nice MOCs! They all remind me of the Khan Academy Monsters, epsecially Shadowstep.

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They look even awesomer than before!
The updates have improved the MOCs without changing the appearance too much,which is good.

Now the only problem is that 08 cracked socket on your self MOC's shoulder.....

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Oh my haha, honestly never even noticed that, good thing its easy to replace

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Very nice, the designs of Shadowstep and Sage came out great especially.

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Very nice.

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All improvements on your older mocs, jayfa probody improved the most(not you but you probably did) I like all of theese, total rating 9/10

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Awwww cheers guys

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Wow, Jayfa, these are all amazing! I salute you.

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Glad you like them man :grinning:

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These look amazing, Shadowstep's my favorite.

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