Jayfa
October 27, 2016, 3:59am
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Hey all, it’s me again. Been a while since i posted here, so I figured I’d show you all some updated versions of a few of my favourite MOCs. I took into consideration a lot of what you guys said in regards to my creations and tried to improve them
First up is Jayfa himself
Improved texture and greebling on lower legs and feet.
Better colour balance between white and gold
Extra coverage on hips
Gold accents on reconfig. blades
Next we have Sage
More vines to fill out empty or boring space
Replaced weird thumbs with curved vine pieces
Additional foliage on back tendrils
Mushroom on right arm
And last we have Shadowstep
Removed weird chest lumps in favour of flatter dish pieces
Replaced awkward stun gun with low profile crossbow on right arm
Added more greebling/texture to upper arms and legs
Tail is now much longer
Eyes now glow in the dark
As always I thank you all for viewing, if there is anything here that you like/dislike please let me know and i will do my best to improve these models further. Also I have provided links to the original topics for each MOC below if you feel so inclined to give them a look.
Hey guys, been meaning to share this for quite a while now. Introducing my self moc: Jayfa. He’s been made mostly using bionicle parts but has a fair bit of system thrown in here and there for texture/greebling etc. He’s been a work in progress for a long time and I’m constantly changing and updating him but i feel like he’s finally reached a point which I’m happy with. The colour scheme uses almost exclusively white and light grey parts but has accents of gold scattered throughout. The overall feel that i went for was a sort of light themed warrior, and hence i took a bit of inspiration for the blades from Brickthing’s Vos-Eon moc as i thought the idea to use these wing pieces as blades was really cool. The head, as well as much of the rest of the moc, is completely custom built and uses …
It’s finally here! That new MOC I’ve been promising you all! This is Sage, The Evergreen Guardian.
Sage is a peaceful forest spirit that nurtures all aspects of the natural world and serves as a protector against the forces that seek to ravage his homeland.
Sage was an extremely fun and interesting build and was based of a concept I had been wanting to explore for quite a while, and that was to make a character that was a living embodiment of the forest itself. And true to this idea, sage contains many elements inspired by various aspects of nature. I.e. the leaves and foliage/vines sprouting off his body, branches and dirt, flowing water, as well as flowers and flower buds. You will also notice that Sage wields no weapons. I felt that after i had finished building him he simply looked t…
Hello once again! Today I would like to show you all another new MOC of mine. This is Shadowstep (super edgy name courtesy of my good friend Davis). I made this guy the very next day after my last MOC: Sage, and I have to say i didn’t really go into building this guy with any plan of how he was gonna turn out or even what the heck he was going to be. But this was the result, a stealthy, ninja-like character with a long whip tail and big ol’ bat ears. This build started with the head (as I’m sure you could have guessed) and I’m quite proud of how it turned out, also please do excuse me for the various illegal techniques used here :^).
Shadowstep: The Silent Assassin [image]
Full Body Shots (Front, Side and Rear) [image] [image] [image]
Head Closeups (Side and Front) [image] [image]
Upper T…
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I really love the black one. Pretty darn impressive.
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Shadowstep is my favorite, all of them are pretty great though!
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Jayfa
October 27, 2016, 7:10am
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All this love for Shadowstep <3 thanks guys, also nice meme
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Ekorak
October 27, 2016, 1:42pm
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Shadowstep’s pretty easily the best.
Also I’m incredibly jelly of your GITD eyes on him.
Might come back and do some more in-depth feedback when I have time. For now though, I’ll just say they’re all pretty good (and quite cute) but also suffer from being a bit too cluttered, especially Jayfa.
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Jayfa
October 27, 2016, 1:50pm
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Thanks man, really appreciate it. And yeah I get the whole clutter problem, its a bad habit i tend to fall into, and its been very hard trying to rework Jayfa out of it, especially considering it was kinda his whole concept to begin with to be greebled to a ridiculous degree
Also its interesting that everyone likes Shadowstep the most, his original topic didn’t get nearly as much attention as the others initially
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Kopeke
October 27, 2016, 2:00pm
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These things look amazing! I love the aesthetics.
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Xephix
October 27, 2016, 2:40pm
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Really improved the last time I saw these mocs.
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Cocoa
October 27, 2016, 4:38pm
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Nice MOCs! They all remind me of the Khan Academy Monsters, epsecially Shadowstep.
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Altair
October 27, 2016, 5:44pm
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They look even awesomer than before!
Now the only problem is that 08 cracked socket on your self MOC’s shoulder…
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Jayfa
October 27, 2016, 9:32pm
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Oh my haha, honestly never even noticed that, good thing its easy to replace
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Stoax
October 28, 2016, 2:47am
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Very nice, the designs of Shadowstep and Sage came out great especially.
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_el
November 2, 2016, 9:19pm
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All improvements on your older mocs, jayfa probody improved the most(not you but you probably did) I like all of theese, total rating 9/10
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Wow, Jayfa, these are all amazing! I salute you.
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Runa
November 3, 2016, 2:04am
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These look amazing, Shadowstep’s my favorite.
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Without further ado, I hope you guys like what you see.
