Looks pretty cool, I agree that it should have a brighter secondary/tertiary color, but other than that is coo.
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Well, here goes.
Legs. the lower legs are eh, whatever. the upper legs are okay, but they seem short compared to the rest of him.
the torso. the waist is a waist, whatever. the stomach isâŚehh. it looks gappy and kills the flow of the MOC. the chest, looks fine.
the arms. they are gappy and have no flow, tires and larger CCBS plates should help. the hands are eh, but I maybe some nice fingers would help?
The head, the mask is fine, the back of the head looks odd, maybe make it longer and fill the studs in.
the weapon, underwhelming, but okay.
the coat is fine.
and the colors, give him another color, he looks bland and almost lifeless.
Overall, he is a good MOC, just a few touch-ups and he will be great!
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wasnât trying to make a spectacular weapon. Iâd like to think itâs an ordinary machete-thing
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I see, and that is fine. but it kinda seems like a let down due to JMPâs past with huge and epic weapons.
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did ya expect tons of weapons in every nook and cranny and brutaka blade machetes?
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Maybe?
When I saw the title, I was like âyeah! a new JMPâ and then I was like âI bet he will have even more over the top weapons!â so that little blade was just a little bit disappointingâŚbut maybe I just am weird.
eheh
I donât have parts to make a new colorscheme without changing an entire feature on the MOC
sorry guis
DangâŚ
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Youâve certainly improved at mocing, far as I can tell.
I think Cal and Jognny boy already said my two big issues with this moc: It needs a secondary color, something bright that isnt white or silver and also get some tires or something around those arms. They looks pretty bad the way they are.
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I really think its goodâŚbut it has no eyes 
it does. Has some lime green. The mask and the way the headâs built prevents anyone from seeing it tho
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To be fair i think the design works, other than general happiness/thinness in places. The arms and lower body for example. Though i think it would work better with a secondary colour. Though for a quick MOC i think its alright :3
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not a fan of the limbs, but the torsoâs alright.
please give him an actual head.
That looks pretty fantastic. Iâm always a fan of Skirt-Armor, having done that with my self-moc once before. Also swords with really long handles, I like those too.
##9.5/10